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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from drkwndz
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0_0... a whole year since the last update :( did the plot bunny die? it was really good so far too...
Review By [drkwndz] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Nummy
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Ok, this story is absolutely fantastic! And I usually hate slash!
But you've truly nailed Xander's character. All the people are very much in character, and that is kind of rare in fanfics.
I love the story, the plot, and the pacing. It is all very well written.
So please please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens.
Review By [Nummy] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Prune
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Dont abandon this! Oh, wow, loved it, all the way through. Haven't had such binge reading in a while!
Review By [Prune] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Blackrosebunny
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Can I say how AMAZING you've made this story? When I saw that you were portraying Xander as a Super!Xander, I was a little iffy cause some people go over the top with no rationale to why he became Super!Xander. But I like the Xander you've created. Not only is he self-sufficient, he's a believable character. The background you've given him is amazing and I really admire your work! I do hope to see more of this story from you! Please update!
Review By [Blackrosebunny] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from EtelkaEtana
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Hello, I've just re-read your entire Return to the Bloodlands series... for the third time.
It is Definately one of my all time favourite stories.
Just wanted to politely ask if there will be a new chapter any time soon. No rush.
I know Christmas is creeping up and far too many people Rush through the Holy Season without taking the time to simply enjoy it. ;)
Review By [EtelkaEtana] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from FicChick
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This is a fascinating series so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [FicChick] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AXanFan
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I'm realizing how Xander must get involved with Rodney -- still guessing, but he must either be living/working with the Genii, a prisoner or spying on them -- I am also assuming he eventually either rescues or aids in Rodney's rescue.

Honestly, Rodney is my least favorite SGA character -- even though I love Xander and am intrigued by what you have written -- I find myself considering abandoning this series. I am assuming the next several chapters will be centering on Rodney and my temptation would be to skip ahead to avoid that -- knowing that I would probably miss some important plot points.

A little of Rodney I can handle, but him being the main focus might be too much -- Maybe, I'll just come back to this later -- I am still curious about how Xander will react to Atlantis and how the SGA teams will react to him.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [21 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AXanFan
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Even though this story was written months ago so this will not influence anything I just felt like commenting on your Notes -- I am cool with Slash if it works in the story, but I so do not see Xander with Rodney or his type. After all that Xander has been through I see him having so much more in common with Ronon -- Even though I like to see Xander as strong and heaven knows what he has been through has "toughened" him up, I still see him needing someone else that can sometimes be the strong one in the relationship - someone who would understand at least some of what he has had to do to survive.

I hate to Xander lose all of his "innocence" or his softer side, but I understand that he would have to be hardened by all that he has seen and been forced to do. Killing the other humans went against all that Xander tried to stand for and while I am not surprised that he survived, he would not be able to come away undamaged or unchanged -- he would have to become a darker person. I just hope there is still just a spark of the old Xander that he has been able to hang onto.

I understand this is your story and I look forward to reading more -- to see how the relationships develop -- I am really curious about when and how they meet Xander -- I can only assume he found some addresses at the listening post and used them to go somewhere else.

Even though I am just starting this 3rd part of the series, I noticed it says it is still not completed. I hope you plan to continue it soon -- I really hate to read stories/series and reach a dead end while it is still incomplete -- while some like them, I hate "cliffhangers"!
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [21 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from greysh
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Lovely fic! I really like the way you write Rodney and Xander :)
your plot is wonderfull and original.
I hope that you will continue with this amazing crossover!
Good luck with the next chapter.
Review By [greysh] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from BillieBog
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This is an amazing story and I hope you can share more with us.

Thanks so much
Billie
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Bluejello
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I stumbled across this series, and fell in love with it. Sorry for not reviewing previous stories/chapters, but I was too impatient to get to the next bit!
Excellent characterization, your original characters/planets/whatever all mesh very well. And the balance of humour and seriousness if perfect. So....... more, please?
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Cholera
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I have to thank you : I passed an incredible two days reading your serie. It's great ! Your Xander is strong but still himself, funny and kind, and for once he didn't met sga the first day which usually makes me cringe (GALAXY,people !). Your explanations are reasonable and he didn't even used his ata gene much. Aha ! I wait for action !
Review By [Cholera] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from starletharlot
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Okay, one. Oh boy does John need a hug! Just... aw.

Did Sarah just try to mind control Xander to give her his fruit cup, and did Xander show no susceptibility whatsoever? Fascinating.

Can't wait for further installments!
Review By [starletharlot] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Genuka
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*Begging* Please please please!!!! Update this soon!!!!1
Review By [Genuka] • Date [12 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from skabs
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I was re-reading, because I truly love this story, and decided to check in on your live journal just in case you updated or posted a snippet... To my ever loving regret you had not. But I just wanted to comment on something I noticed with your snippets...
"Underneath Xander’s name was a rather good sketch of a wolf swallowing what looked like a pair of flailing legs- and, unnecessarily, an arrow identifying the legs as Rodney."
In the snippet you didn't have that last part, with the arrow pointing toward the legs... I just wanted to say that I LOVED that part and I'm glad you added it for the "official" post.
The only thing that would make it better is if you UPDATED recently... I really, really, really, want to know what's going to happen next!
Review By [skabs] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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