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Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from SnakeFox
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This is such a brilliant story. It's incredibly well written and easy to read, it's engaging and most of all I really love the concept of Xander being their kid. Never would've thought of it but it works really well. Thanks a lot, this was a great read.
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from lazypr
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Please, oh please say you are still continuing this story! I've recently started catching up on the show Chuck and of course and am a long-standing fan of BTVS (emphasis on Xander), so this story is a wonderful treat. I really hope to see more.
Review By [lazypr] • Date [31 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
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OH MY GODDESS... I have no words for how much I love this story...

It's funny and sweet and a bit far-fetched and it all works very well together...

Cheers!
MJ
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [23 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from Bobboky
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awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from tosca
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Awesome story! (sorry, couldn't resist) But seriously, this is. I love the way it's two families meeting each other. Love the married banter between Chuck and Sarah, though I feel sorry for Casey being rejected out of hand by his godson (even if he is asking for it with his smug 'ha!-I-no-longer-can-fall-in-love' attitude). I'm especially looking forward to seeing the 'Chuckies' interact with the Scoobies, and how they cope with each other. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Review By [tosca] • Date [7 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from (Past Donor)MetropolisRising
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This is great stuff. I've been kicking around a much different Chuck/Buffy cross in my head and trying to figure it out logistically, so I was glad to read one that was so different, but obviously very well thought out. I enjoyed the version of the buffy universe you're writing (can't say I love the comics so much) and the only thing that bugged, but that made for excellent story, was the loss of Vi (my minor character fave for some reason). Excellent Chuck and Sarah voices, and I hope that Casey is given a fair shake by the slayers soon (I think he and Faith might be a hoot if they can get past departmental differences). Looking forward to more when your muse permits!
Review By [(Past Donor)MetropolisRising] • Date [10 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from redhandgrunt
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Odd yet interesting story so far.
Review By [redhandgrunt] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from Kaerion
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Since my only knowledge of 'Chuck' comes from wikipedia and hearing some friends talk about it (plus reading a couple of chapters of other BtVS/Chuck crossovers), and I tend to dislike crossovers where I'm not familiar with all the series that are used, I almost didn't start reading this at all, though I'm very glad I decided to give it a shot. You've been very good at providing just enough information about the main characters to make me care about them (though I'm hoping we'll get to know Xander's new aunt and uncle, and any other important friends of the family, better in the next chapters), and I'm also impressed at how subtly you gave us the back-story on what the Scoobies have been up to since Sunnydale, in between the 'current events', without making it seem forced or out of place.

As far as the plot goes, it's hard to say much more, since you haven't gotten into what's actually happening yet (except for a few hints that I didn't get, either because I'm not familiar enough with 'Chuck', or because they're just subtle foreshadowing that's meant to make us guess), but I really like what I've seen so far, and you've got me excitedly waiting for the next chapter.

Your characterization of the characters that I already know from Buffy has also been way beyond expectations, combining the familiar with some changes that I can easily see happening as time passes, ending up with what feels like real people, and not just caricatures; and like I mentioned before - real people that are easy to care about, which is even more important.

So, now that the reunion has just gotten started, and (bad) things have started happening in the background, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, especially for the conversations that are bound to happen. Thank you very much for sharing this, and keep up the great work!
Review By [Kaerion] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from LordCorwin
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I rarely rate stories but this one I am ... given that it's excellent. I did not find anything to "nit" about .... I would ask for any further chapters, that you explain why Xander was sent to the past .. aside from "saving the world.... twice"... and what not... :)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from saa
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A definite 10. Loved the chapter. Can't wait to see what complications crop up (because they always do) and how Casey winds up.
Review By [saa] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from Waverly
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Amazing job! Please update again soon!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from djhardim
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It would be ironic if the fatigues Xander wore on Halloween 97 had belonged to Casey.
Comments from author:
Huh. That is a good idea, although I won't use it in this story. That's one coincidence too many.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from RevDorothyL
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Awww...! Rough on Casey to be excluded from the reunion (though for understandable reasons), but I'm so glad that Xander's reunion with Sarah has started well.

My favorite line in this chapter has to be the part where Sarah and Chuck simultaneously announce that Xander obviously takes after the other -- adorable!
Comments from author:
Poor Casey.

His center of pure rage also won't help the situation.

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're liking this.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from MistressTitania
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Oh, such a unique take on the idea that Xander has other real family in the crossover worlds of fandom. I love the way you are bringing both shows together and connecting things nicely. The characters are so wonderfully spot on too. Just all around a joy to read! Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad to read that you're enjoying this.

I'll try to maintain this level of quality for future installments.
Review By [MistressTitania] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Conference Committee" from eriktheviking
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At least his parents may be able to cope with Xander's life. Great chapter, thanks.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And yes, Chuck and Sarah's experiences with the Intersect have definitely improved their ability to cope with the strange.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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