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Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from LFW
Review:
Great Faith
Enjoying Xander and Dawn married
and looking forward to more; like how some of the in the know Federal Govt people will react to who Xander's parents are
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [8 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL! That was funny as hell. I like how he got the name Havok and the fact that Dawn finally managed to pin him down. Great story!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're liking it.

Heh, while outlining, Carina and Dawn were the final two contestants to be paired with Xander. Then I decided that if I involved Carina, it would be a tad too small of a world.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
A quarter into the chapter, and I'm suddenly going "Oh, who didn't see this coming?" Still, love Faith and Wills interaction, absolutly adorable
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Faith is a challenging blast to write. You can't make her a caricature, but she has so much ... unique character.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from sunamee
Review:
Starting to get interesting. Nice idea with the nickname Havok for Xander. I look forward to seeing what happens next and where you plan to take this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Stick around and I hope to live up to your expectations.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from Scrappychic
Review:
Very interesting and original. I love it so far and can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Hopefully Chapter Two: Conference Committee (working title, subject to change) will be ready for release next week.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from eriktheviking
Review:
Cracking good chapter with a great twist.
Comments from author:
Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
WOW! Did not see that coming at all. Excellent and imaginative.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Now this is an original fan fiction. Very impressive so far. Can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it.

Not completely original though. It should be noted that The Wander's Family Ties gave me the inspiration to write an unexpected Xander's parents story. I was tempted to set Chuck in the late 70's or early 80's, but the thought of the Intersect running off of Apple IIe's dissuaded me from that idea.

Keldin's Strangeness at the Buy More actually got me to try watching Chuck. So thanks to him for introducing me to this fandom.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from Maltor
Review:
Excellent story so far. The family reunion between Xander and his parents should be interesting at the rate you're going. But it's the introductions between Xander and rest of the Bartowski family that I feel will be most interesting. I mean how will Xander react to his father having his own personal Andrew in the form of Morgan.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

One of the key elements of the story will be the relationship between Xander and the Bartowski clan. My outline indicates that the parallels between Morgan and Andrew will not be lost upon Xander.
Review By [Maltor] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Absolutely fascinating! Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!

I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from WhiteWolf
Review:
The moment I read adopted, I knew it.
Comments from author:
Yes, I realize it was a tad telegraphed.

Still, thanks for the review and I hope you keep enjoying it!.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from Greywizard
Review:
LMAO reading the last part of this chapter, since I can easily see Faith trying to enlist the Bartowkis for an endorsement as their grandchild's godmother. ;-)

REALLY like the idea of 'Havoc' being Xander's nickname. ;-) And the idea of Chuck and Sarah as Xander's parents is FUN!!!

Why does Buffy want to 'hang Havoc's balls over the fireplace'? Is it because he slept with and married her baby sister?

Anyway, liking this story more and more with each chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

I'm surprised that I've yet to read a story that bestows Xander the moniker of 'Havok'. There are so many stories referring to him as Cyclops or Cyke that you'd think authors would realize that AleXander shares a first name with the other Summers brother.

As to the Buffy/Xander schism, those events will only be alluded to in this story. While his relationship with Dawn has done nothing to help the situation, events in Rome are at the crux of the matter.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from theraceskong
Review:
Sp far this is really interesting. Looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hope you enjoy the future chapters.
Review By [theraceskong] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Amber Alert" from XanderHalcyon
Review:
Love it! Please update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Next chapter will hopefully be out within a week. I need to finish the last couple of scenes and my beta needs time to correct my numerous mistakes.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Spring Equinox" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
=)
Comments from author:
Thanks!

I hope you enjoy the story!
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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