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Buffy and Wookiees

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Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from mousemt
Review:
Great beginning. More please?
Review By [mousemt] • Date [29 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Keshkreature
Review:
Interesting beginning. Buffy's encounter with the wookies is quite well done. I like how you got around their communication problems. I guess the little one owes her a life-debt now? I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this next.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [29 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Tempi
Review:
Interesting beginning. I look forward to reading more.

Have you considered some chapters from the Wookiee's pov?
Comments from author:
I don't speak Shyriiwook and using Human languages to represent their thoughts is somehow ... I don't think it would come out well.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [29 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from grd
Review:
It would be so funny when Buffy finds out they understood her just fine. I'm looking forward to her displaying her abilities some more. Love how much she's intergrated herself with the Wookies. There is something so comforting about them that it just seems to fit so very well.
Review By [grd] • Date [29 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Linauri
Review:
oh, please tell me that you're going to write more about Buffy and Chewie's friendship (Puppy is Chewie, right?). Heck, even if it's not Chewie, I'd love to see more. This was so great!
Comments from author:
If you follow the time-line, Chewie is already over 150 years old, so he can't be Puppy and he can't be Big Giant, because Chewie is a bit of a sour loser.

At the moment, Chewie's part is as much as it was in the first three episodes (the new ones) of Star Wars. I think I could give him a few scenes in Attack of the Clones, making it seem natural without making it seem as if I'm being forced by the readers to give him some extra 'camera' time.
Review By [Linauri] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Nightscream
Review:
I greatly enjoyed this. I hope to read the sequels soon.

*edit*

Oh I thought that it was a one-shot with sequels....sorry! In that case I hope you post the next few chapters soon! :)
Comments from author:
Don't be too greedy. Wait until I've posted the first story before talking about the sequels.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Thedruid
Review:
Good start. One technical note though, spears can't really slash. Impale with the pointed end, and bash with the other end and near the pointed end, but not slash like a sword does. You might be thinking more of a halbred, which is basically an axe blade on the end of a long pole.
Comments from author:
It has a wicked metal blade. Buffy would call it a spear. (I called it a spear-like weapon) The reason why Buffy slashed with the spear, if she had trusted it into the Furry-T-Rex and hadn't hit any vital organ, it might have struck or broken. I think slashed wouldn't be too bad of a description. She was going for some vital blood-vein.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
Brought a smile to my face.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Fyrloche
Review:
Interesting. Now buffy has acquired a lifedebt and a companion until the debt is cleared. I wonder how long it will take her to get to understand her new friends? Is the crossbow guy Chewie?
Comments from author:
Chewie isn't on the Wookiee world and probably out in space piloting some spaceship.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Klyk
Review:
Brilliant start of a story.
Made my morning so much brighter.
Comments from author:
I'm a brilliant person. *GRIN*

And you have brightened my morning with this review(not only you, but also the other guys who reviewed
Review By [Klyk] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from shazamfan
Review:
FANTASTIC! Without a doubt one of the best Star Wars fanfics I've read in a LONG TIME! I like how Buffy points out to Puppy how foolish his hunt was as well as her taking down of the 'elder' Wookie.

I really am looking forward to more of this chapter, Buffy no doubt joining the 'clan'. Hoping to see her in some nice Wookie made clothing, doing some hunting and meeting some prissy Jedi.

Makes you wonder if they feel a echo of something that is a mixture of 'Dark Side and Light' about her and wonder if her abilities are some other Force-like ability. Hoping you to not have the PTB show up or Whistler to blab on and on about her role here and hoping she is just GOOD and LOST!

Hope chapter 2 is coming soon!

-J-
Comments from author:
hmmm, Wookiee clothing? I think the only clothing they wear are head-wear, caps. I got a nice image of Buffy wearing that *blush* LOL

Buffy isn't going to be showing any Force-like ability and no PTB or Whistler or even Willow showing up.
Review By [shazamfan] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from kittenpoker
Review:
I think I might die laughing when Buffy gets introduced to someone who speaks her language and she calls her Wookie friend "Puppy"!!!
Comments from author:
Hmmm, that could be interesting.
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [24 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from BkwrmDancer
Review:
ok I am really intrigued . . . this sounds really really promising . . .
Comments from author:
intrigued and promising? Those are good words to read in a review of a first chapter.
Review By [BkwrmDancer] • Date [24 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from grd
Review:
Buffy and the Wookiees has a lot of potential, just glad it wasn't Ewoks. Love how Buffy fought and helped her "Puppy". lol.
Comments from author:
I think Dawn would fit better with the Ewoks.
Review By [grd] • Date [24 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Newford
Review:
That was a fun read and just what I needed, thanks!
Hope you continue.
Comments from author:
The story is finished, Plus two sequels.
Review By [Newford] • Date [24 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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