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Review of chapter "Allies" from Trace
Review:
I'm SO glad you're continuing this. It's so refreshing to see a fic in this genre that isn't a Mary Sue or obviously written by a 13 year old drooling over Edward to the exclusion of all else.

I absolutely love this story thus far, and I can't wait to see where you go with it. I have the feeling the First is going to get a very rude reality-check with the Cullens backing the Scoobies. *evil grin*
Comments from author:
Mary Sue's tend to make my eyes bleed a bit, so if I stray into that territory, I hope someone will smack it out of me...:) Thankfully, I am not 13-years-old and prefer storyline to drool. It's a romance tale at its core, so I'm sure there will be some points where their relationship will play a key role (like in the chapter I just posted), but I suppose that can't always be helped.

Well, we all know that The First is getting its ass kicked - I wonder if Jasper would be able to tell when it is The First because of his empathic abilities...hmmm...idea!

Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [Trace] • Date [3 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Allies" from MaraLiz
Review:
Another good chapter. For those of us who don't know the Twilight world, thanks for providing the info to be able to follow along.

As always, love the way you write Dawn, you've got that girl down pat. Take care -- Maraliz
Comments from author:
Glad you are enjoying the story - and that you are able to catch up on what you need to know...any questions, feel free to e-mail me.

Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [MaraLiz] • Date [3 Dec 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential" from jack
Review:
DEFINITELY CONTINUE
Comments from author:
Aye, aye, Captain! Have done so!

Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [jack] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential" from (Past Donor)FaithSummers
Review:
Please do continue - this is the first twilight cross-over that I've really liked. I do have one suggestion - if you are going to do "first person" pick a person and tell everything from their point of view it would be less confusing. I love the idea though!
Comments from author:
I'm trying to keep one person's POV per chapter, but if I do really need to switch for storyline purposes or because I really need another character's perspective, I'll be sure to put a divider line to separate the POVs. I do that anyway when I switch perspectives in 3rd person POV stories.

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter - hopefully you will continue to enjoy the story as it gets going!

Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [(Past Donor)FaithSummers] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential" from Kaite
Review:
OMG! This story has already got me hooked. Please continue with it. I think it'd be interesting for the Cullen's to meet Buffy, Spike and Angel to compare their differences with each other. Cant wait for another chapter!

Kait
Comments from author:
Personally, I can't wait until they meet Anya. I don't think Edward is going to want to spend too much time in her mind...he's a bit 'gentlemanly' for her thoughts!

Thank you for reading & reviewing! And, thank you for the Rec!
Review By [Kaite] • Date [28 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential" from Trace
Review:
Good start. I hope you continue this; it has tons of potential.
Comments from author:
Thank you - I did decide to continue, and actually just posted chapter # 2.

I appreciate the review!
Review By [Trace] • Date [27 Nov 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential" from (Past Donor)SwimTeam
Review:
Great Job! This is very entertaining and good characterization.
Rory :)
Comments from author:
Gracias y gracias, chica.
:)
Review By [(Past Donor)SwimTeam] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential" from TeamB
Review:
YES please continue!
Comments from author:
Okay - I did!

Thank you for your review!
Review By [TeamB] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential" from Kethric
Review:
I couldn't stand reading Twilight. Didn't get very far into it before I just couldn't take it anymore.

Don't like Buffy, either. Sadly, I like the fics much better than the series.

And if you continue this, I'll definitely continue reading.
Comments from author:
I have just posted another chapter, so I hope you enjoy that one as well.

Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [Kethric] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential" from Sadie
Review:
Well I certainly wouldn't mind reading more! Bella in training would be a hoot and a half.
Comments from author:
I have a line for her training in mind that just cracks me up every time I remember it - see if you can pick it out when the chapter comes up (it will be a good few chapters from now, though)...

Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [Sadie] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential" from immortalwizardelffan
Review:
*shakes head* Only Bella and Edward. From what I've read so far everyone's in character. And methinks the Scoobies would be glad to have 7 more vampires on their side who can walk in the daylight as well as at night time. Willow, Faith, Dawn and Xander are in for a shock LOL.
Comments from author:
They just can't catch a break...

I just hope I can maintain the characters throughout the story - there's so many of them!

I am planning a very surreal moment for the vampires as they experience a sunny day in Sunnydale - should prove amusing - to me anyway...:)

Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential" from (Recent Donor)Emergency
Review:
Yes! Yes you should continue! This is so awesome, a different take on the Twilight fandom. But awesome non the less...
Comments from author:
Wow! Very enthusiastic - I like it! Thank you for your review!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Emergency] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potential" from TrueRedRose
Review:
Should you continue? ABSOLUTELY!!!! Good start.
Comments from author:
Thank you - I have decided to continue and I just posted the next chapter!

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [TrueRedRose] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential" from MaraLiz
Review:
Good story, even though I haven't read 'Twlight' or seen the movie, I was able to pick up just enough to follow. I look forward to reading more. Take care.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear from you - I just posted the next chapter. Thank you for all of your beta efforts!
Review By [MaraLiz] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Potential" from TexasAries
Review:
I have to confess I haven't read the books or seen the movie but I have to say this is a very interesting begining to a story I would like to see continue.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. Even if you haven't read the books or seen the movie, I'm going to try to make the story as "user friendly" as possible. Hope you continue to enjoy!
Review By [TexasAries] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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