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Review of chapter "(BtVS/NCIS) Teenage DiNozzo" from Caliadragon
Review:
LOL! I love it and he can't use the DiNozzo correction method with Xander, it would probably backfire.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Or worse, Xander inheriting it and using it on his Slayers!
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "(BtVS/NCIS) Teenage DiNozzo" from zafaran
Review:
{snicker} Nice line to end the NCIS ficlet with. That could be a hell of a story if your muse ever got inclined to take it to more chapters. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
Thanks, though I can't take credit for the last line. JediKnight gave that to me. I don't have any plans to do a chapter story with this though, I have a fair number of wip's out there already. One of the main reasons for this ficlet collection is to get the ideas out of my head quickly so I can move on to my wip's. That being said, a follow-up scene in this collection isn't out of the question.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "(BtVS/NCIS) Teenage DiNozzo" from eriktheviking
Review:
I think the title of this collection captures the substance so well. Great shorts, thanks.
Comments from author:
Glad you're liking them. It actually took me longer to pick a title than it did to write the first couple ficlets.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "(BtVS/F.E.A.R.) F.E.A.R. Itself" from LordCorwin
Review:
This particular little drabble could use a few more chapters ... a short and quick story .. :)
Comments from author:
Sorry, no plans for this one. I have been thinking about doing more with either my second Terminator ficlet or the Star Wars one. We'll see what happens.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "(BtVS/F.E.A.R.) F.E.A.R. Itself" from lorwen
Review:
good stories...
Comments from author:
Glad you liked them.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Star Wars) Apprenticeship" from Neverwillmobile
Review:
I'd love to see more of this one. What if Vader secluded himself to teach Xander the beginning lessons and while spending so much time with Xander he changes sides earlier than canon?
Comments from author:
I could see them having an affect on each other. A lighter, but not exactly good, Vader. A darker, but not exactly evil, Xander.
Review By [Neverwillmobile] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Star Wars) Apprenticeship" from CPTSkip
Review:
All of your short stories are very nice. I would love to read more of Darth Xander's life from your last one.
Comments from author:
Thanks. There are actually several of these I wouldn't mind turning into full-length stories, but I just have too many WIP's and too little time to actually sit down and write.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Star Wars) Apprenticeship" from Maeven
Review:
OOOOOOH, I *like* this one, lots! Thia one needs to be expanded into a full-length story.

I can just picture young Xander innocently/trustingly holding his hands out to Vader to be picked up...

...and although Vader thinks he will corrupt the boy to the Dark Side, gradually it's Xander's loving nature that 'corrupts' HIM, until Vader realizes he has to run with the boy, to protect him against the Emperor!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. If I ever did do a full-length story on this it would probably follow the game's plot or, more accurately, use it as a general guide to which I would expand on. I'd likely through a Buffy villain into the mix to, just to complicate Xander's life.

Actually, I would let him get back the the Buffyverse at somepoint too. Sith Xander versus Dark Willow would be a hell of a fight.
Review By [Maeven] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Star Wars) Apprenticeship" from spanderfan
Review:
I love this one. I really hope there will be more.
Review By [spanderfan] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Witchblade) Calm, Still, and Dangerous" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting story idea.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Witchblade) Calm, Still, and Dangerous" from LordCorwin
Review:
Good ficlet .... would like to see a "story" behind it though.. :)
Comments from author:
Sorry, no more of this one planned. I have been working on another, longer, Witchblade crossover though, where Xander meets up with Sara while investigating Jake's 'suicide'.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Witchblade) Calm, Still, and Dangerous" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
I loved Ian Nottingham in Witchblade!
Comments from author:
He is cool. Well, until Marz made him into a sexist asshole who hits pregnant women. Other than that I've mostly enjoyed Ron Marz's run on the book.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Witchblade) Calm, Still, and Dangerous" from djhardim
Review:
Well, Xander still gets a military background. I got the feeling that Ian had been in one of the British Special Forces.
Comments from author:
I think you're right, I vaguely remember them mentioning something along those lines.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Terminator: tSCC) Metal Born Protector" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the update, you do great work on your "Terminator: tSCC" crossovers. This would be another ficlet I am hoping you'll turn into a full-length story.
Comments from author:
Glad you like the drabbles. Of my two Terminator ficlets this would be the one most likely to turn into a longer story. The first is a funny scene but this has more long term fic potential to it. I have been thinking of doing a story with this one over the last couple weeks but I want to get my other wip's a little further along before I start another one. That being said, if my muse says otherwise I'll write what it tells me.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "(BtVS/Terminator: tSCC) General One-Eye" from Vorax
Review:
Heh, it would be interesting to see more of this one.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Vorax] • Date [11 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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