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Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil

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Review of chapter "Politicking" from (Past Donor)boo
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I love this story. Cordy is awesome and she truly does deserve to end up with doyle even if its the merry version. please write more!
Comments from author:
A note:Cordy will not end up with Doyle. But I'm delighted that you're enjoying this series and hope you continue to do so in the future- lack of Cordy/Doyle aside.
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [11 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Politicking" from Booster
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Very enjoyable, houses and nice to come back to after a while. Sage seemed to be very much in character with his teasing seductive ways, while Cordelia's new position is supremely logical and using both sets of continuity expertly. Well done.
Comments from author:
I love being supremely logical. It's tough with these too worlds, mostly because MG is just NOT logical. Sage is just too much fun to write- he's snarky and witty and just a bit cruel.
Review By [Booster] • Date [10 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Politicking" from Darksidhe
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Woohoo! *Does happy dance around the room*

You've updated! I had given up hope.

I love the fact that Cordelia has to be in the Merry universe. I am looking forward to more updates.
Comments from author:
Never give up hope- not without checking my profile anyway. I stated there that I've been writing my doctoral dissertation, and that most definitely comes before fanfic fun. But rest assured this fic has not been abandoned and will continue in at least one more 'book'.
Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [6 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Politicking" from (Past Donor)Mhalachai
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Oh, love. Let me express my love: Cordelia is very nicely done, with her wibbly insecurites and her confidence all mixed togther. Her acceptance of Sage, as possible threat and still just another guy, very "her", I think. And Codry wanting to solve all of Merry's problems... so like her, to want to butt in. I can't help but wonder how Maeve will react to Cordy, or more precisely, how Cordy will react to Maeve.

I can't wait until Andais finds out about Cordy :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Andias isn't going to be particularly pleased about Cordy's existence, I don't believe. And there's a twist or two that will complicate things immensely- particularly for the royals. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you like Cordy's first meeting with Maeve.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mhalachai] • Date [3 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making an Entrance" from Lanalyn
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It has been a LONG time since you last updated. I would really like to read more. I hope you update soon.
Comments from author:
How about now? I've plotted out the next few chapters as well. Hopefully it won't be nearly as long between updates again.
Review By [Lanalyn] • Date [9 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making an Entrance" from Darksidhe
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OHHHHHH! I love this! I see that you haven't posted in awhile. I hope that you are going to finish this story, it's really fantastic. If you are going thru the horrors of writer's block, may the muses bless you with tons of inspiration
Comments from author:
I am definitely going to finish this. When? I dunno, but I will. Cordy, Dennis, and Sage are too much fun. Snarky ahoy!

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Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [3 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making an Entrance" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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I know this is a long overdue review so I shall do my best to make it worth the wait; not that it will be difficult considering this chapter. I ADORE this installment. Too many things to comment on so I apologize in advance for quoting half your fic back at you. Dennis – Love Dennis here. Never seen him in such a, well, a working relationship with Cordy before. Great depth added to his character here. Getting to see some new dimension (if not visibility) to him both in his actions and Cordy’s musings. Sage is a riot – I want to hug him – well except for those tiny ‘I would crush him’ and ‘He has sharp teeth’ snags. “Breeding pool” *snort* “and now you’re banging your princess with abandon to save her life.” She burst out into mildly cynical laughter. “I’ve been magicked away into a freaking romance novel. This is too much. You’ve all got that Fabio hair gone to hell and there’s wooage at ever turn.” *laughs until she weeps* And that, QueenC, is the crux of my problem with Hamilton’s series. Really – enough with the pseudo-S&M covers, slap on a bare-chested hunk and a heroine with her breast nearly heaving out of her dress and THAT would be truth in advertising. Enough of that. Though you are missing a ‘y’ on every (someday I will teach my inner editor to shut up). In our next thrilling installment – Jeremy! Yipee! This chapter is hysterical – really working this cross for all its worth. Nicely, nicely done! ~Vesica
Comments from author:
Thank you thank you! Your reviews always inspire- so going back and reading this makes me want to go write more. Mmmm, Sagey snark.

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Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [3 Mar 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making an Entrance" from Discord
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An update! Yay! The end was so Cordelia! Very cute. Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Hope you like what comes up next.
Review By [Discord] • Date [10 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making an Entrance" from Booster
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*happy sigh* New DoL is always good, especially this week. Like your Cordy discovering the facts of life around Merry, and prompting comparing them to a bad romance. Still curious about whether Cordy's going to be classed as a Princess too, and allowed 'access' to the pool. *snerks* Given that Andais is the Queen of Air and Darkness, sooner or later she'll know about Cordy, and that meeting will be absolutely fascinating.

Very good part, houses - looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Well, I have to admit that Cordy's reaction was a bit like mine. A tiny author self insertion if you will, but one I think still fits Cordy's personality. Oh yes, there'll be a meeting with Andais, as well as others, coming up. Cordy will rattle their little world, though perhaps not as you'd think. Thanks for the lovely words.
Review By [Booster] • Date [10 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making an Entrance" from websandwhiskers
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I was very happy to see this updated! :) I liked that Cordy kept slipping back into speaking in the present tense when discussing Angel & Co. - it provided a nice touch of vulnerability to her character. Of course, shredding the tissue and being worried about this reality's shopping opportunities was classic Cordy. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop the dynamics between the various characters - adding another girl to Merry's little gang should make for some interesting adjustments for everyone. Looking (patiently) forward to more! :)
Comments from author:
She is still vulnerable, as much as she's putting on a tough front. The acting job of her life, as far as she's concerned. Nobody wants a weepy champion and she's doing her best, but it won't be easy. Oh, yes, adjustments, that's for sure. Heh. Thank you for the lovely review, and hopefully it won't be too much longer between updates in the future.
Review By [websandwhiskers] • Date [9 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making an Entrance" from CinnamonGrrl
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How is it that you make even unknown-to-me fandoms utterly intriguing and engrossing? You're teh kewliez, darling. Great job.
Comments from author:
Aww, you're too kind. I do what I can. Thanks, sweets.
Review By [CinnamonGrrl] • Date [9 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making an Entrance" from Tegasus
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Another great chapter! Keep them coming!
Comments from author:
Oh, yes, they'll be coming. Once WTB is done, I can focus on this and CB. I can't wait myself!
Review By [Tegasus] • Date [9 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from rhiannon3
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I really love this fic. All of the characters are great especially Cordy. Are you planning on pairing her up with someone? I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
rhi
Comments from author:
[smiles] yeah, I hope the next chapter comes soon too. If only I had the time to sit around write fic anytime I want. Unfortunately paying the bills comes first...

As for the pairing, that's my little secret, but I can tell you this--- Merry gets lots of suitors, why can't Cordy? [wink]
Review By [rhiannon3] • Date [24 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I am still laughing about Nicca’s confusion over the whole Cohokia, Illinois thing. We are all right there with you, Cordy! Of course, if Cleveland has a Hellmouth I suppose the sidhe can hang around in Illinois! I am beginning to believe that all the sidhe unconsciously do some sort of glamour that drives everyone to have distracting fantasies about their hair. I found your mention a little funny since every time I encountered that in the books I was like ‘Okay, okay they have great hair. We get it already. Geez, lady the horse is dead – stop beating it!’. *sniff* Doyle! *sob* “Hell, I’m not even nice!” Oh honey, where did you pick up the mistaken impression that heroes have to be nice. She obviously is blissfully unaware of the years of superhero tradition and canon. I think we all could have lived without that reminder of Angel’s Darla-style naps. Dennis is the best – and you are a wonderful person for giving him a chance to be a main character. (Don’t bother pointing out that he really isn’t a main character here – in my mind he is!) I hope you have not let this fic fall by the wayside…. ~Vesica
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh pooh! I really wanted Dennis to make a corporeal appearance but I suppose readers can’t be choosers. QueenC gets big points in my book for being able to shock Merry’s little court with that bit about the loofah! Now there was a mental image – makes me annoyed I don’t have a ghostie roommate…that could be, useful. “She could get used to gentlemen like this.” Ah, yes. I can see Cordy getting very used to Merry’s world. Heck, any girl in her right mind suddenly elevated to the lofty if a bit life imperiling position of Fae Princess could get used to it. Is there somewhere to sign up? ~Vesica
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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