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Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil

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Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Dennis does love his Cordy. Good to see [or maybe she wont] she'll have somone familiar around.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Ohhhhhh. Dennis, you hitcher! I so was not expecting that. Awesome. I can't wait for more of this.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [8 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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YIPPEEE!!!
*Dances around*
The sequal is here!! And I'm loving every minute of it.
I'm happy that Dennis got to go with Cordelia and that you managed to start the sequal off really well. It was a a great start, I can just imagine Merry and Frost faces as Cordelia suddenly burst intot he room, sword at a ready... leaping over the bed and towards the window.
*Laughs*
I wander what you got next planned.
Since you've got me guessing what would to happen next and I like that.
You wouldn't be able to imagine how many times I've come across a story that has a plot so predictable that you can tell what the ending would be like just by reading the first chapter.
Anyways enough of me and more of your story. ^_~
~Seak
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Wow! Wow. I'm still dizzy.If it was your intention to start out with a bang, you've succeeded. Brilliant action-y stuff right at the beginning, and I loved how Cordelia managed to leave all of Merry's guards gaping and not quite knowing what hit them. She has a way of doing that. :)

Also, is it just me or is she reverting to Queen C mode? The highschoole references seemed to indicate that she does, probably unconsciously. Well, I oved this chapter. It exceeded all of my expectations (which were pretty high) *and* had a lovely surprise at the end as well. Now I'm really eager to know what will happen in the next chapter.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Yay! You're definately off to a good start with this, houses! And can I just say "Yay Dennis"? 'Cuz Dennis da ghost/poltregeist/dead guy is just COOL! More stories should have Dennis in them, in my opinion.

-- Rosy the Cat
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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[moaning] No, don't leave it there........ [whining] HOUses........you clever, evil thing, how did Dennis manage to stowaway?

Brilliant as ever, dear :)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh, good. I felt sorry for Dennis at the beginning of S4. It's a wonderful start -- looking forward to the next posting. And, of course, the next posting of Courtly Behavior.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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"This was going to be just like high school, and she ruled high school." Ah, my mistake. It's going to be Queen C, not Princess C. ;)

Yay on bringing Dennis over with Cordy. It's nice to see that she's got at least one link back to Angel Investigations to both ground her and almost inspire her in a way. Though I certainly wasn't expecting Dennis to be spotted by the sidhe so quickly. Nice touch with thwarting the assassination attempt so quickly - I now have no idea where the uber-plot is going, and that's always a good thing with fics.

Very enjoyable fic. Keep 'em coming houses, and I'll keep on reviewing.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Dennis??!!! About time someone remembered to put him in a Cordy story, he never gets the attention he deserves. I'm enjoying this (rather more than I enjoyed the source material), so please keep it up.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Dance of Light II: Lifting the Veil" from Anonymous Reviewer
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This is great so far. Very amusing. Can't wait for Queen C to reap some havoc on the lives of all around her. Soap Opera indeed.
Thanks
Carol
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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