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Review of chapter "Chapter 5 The birthday curse part 2" from AllenPitt
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Maybe if B. is lucky, they'll send Gwendolyn Post over to help B. sort out her personal feelings. Heh.
Even at this point, if John W. hears of this, it might get back to her aunt. How many people does she know named "Buffy"? And hey in a few years will everyone 'remember' that Dawn has been with their aunt all this time?
Comments from author:
lol, Mrs. Post. I could bring her in at some point... maybe Buffy's when Buffy is 15 and almost ready for sex. Merrick will request her to give Buffy 'The Talk', lol. I'm thinking of having Dawn come back when Buffy's 18, dunno yet for sure.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 The birthday curse part 1" from PATM
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Very good story. Not a fan the series but Buffy's story gives this story heart and I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, more is coming :D
Review By [PATM] • Date [16 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 The birthday curse part 1" from Clandestine
Review:
Oooh awesome chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks :D
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 The birthday curse part 1" from feekh
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I really like this. The interaction with Merrick is particularly good, especially his slow slide into seeing her as family.
My one quibble is that neither Buffy nor Dean and Sam talk or act their age. Especially some of the things Buffy says are way too mature for a ten year old, no matter how traumatising an experience she goes through. Particularly jarring for me was 15 year old Dean frenching 13 year old Buffy, who by all accounts is tiny and therefore should look even more child-like.
Apart from that I enjoy this.
Comments from author:
Since I'm a guy it's hard for me to sometimes get the young teenage girl thoughts right. However there are guys who go after a hot girl. And yes there is the age issue, but I'd like to think that Buffy looks mature for her age, no matter her size. But yes I struggle with that, luckily I'm entering the middle/later teenage phase :D
Thanks for the review!
Review By [feekh] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 The birthday curse part 1" from AllenPitt
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at least she's well adjusted and makes friends easily... or something. And now at some point one of the Winchesters is going to mention meeting a "Buffy" at the roadhouse... should be fun.
You know, if Dawn gets introduced to this, it'd get real confusing. Retcon memory would have D. living with their aunt all this time?
Comments from author:
It's gonna be more like Buffy, Sam and Dean going to try and hide them knowing each other from John.
You'll see what I'm getting at.

As for Dawn, yeah I'm probably going to insert her in by letting her live with Ellen until probably during the second story in the series.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 Not a slayer" from oooo
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With her parents dying so early, I wonder how Merrick and Bill's deaths will affect her now. I like the story so far, and I can't wait to see how everything turns out. Please update soon! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks, Buffy's sure gonna have issues with parental figures dropping like flies around her. Just put chapter 4 up.
Review By [oooo] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 Not a slayer" from deansgal
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Wow. please keep going this story was awesome. Love it.

DG
Comments from author:
Thank you, I will.
Review By [deansgal] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 Not a slayer" from Clandestine
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Great update! Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thanks :D More will come when my beta's done with it. Two chapters are alying with her at the moment so...
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [28 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 Not a slayer" from AllenPitt
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so if Merrick dies does giles become her guardian & take her to Sunnyd, or is she 'found' by her aunt who then moves there? Inquiring minds want to know! I bet burning down a gym would make the papers... of course they'd think she was a shapeshifter at least at first...
have to wonder if a devil's snare would catch a slayer (demonic essence inside her after all)...
Comments from author:
Lol, well there's gonna be some surprises coming up. Wait and see :D
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 The Watcher’s Council" from littleoldme
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I love this fic- but I'm hoping that it flashes forward several years to Buffy being called. I'm not that interested in seeing her being trained whilst her family thinks she's dead.
Comments from author:
Kinda spoiler so be warned before reading further below

I want to establish a relationship between Buffy/Dean before she's called before I flash forwards to her being called. This is a series so I'm gonna be writing this for a while. My guess would be her being called in chapter 8 or something like that. won't be that long a wait since I've finished chapter 5 and send it to my beta. plus x-mas vacation gives lots of time to write.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 The Watcher’s Council" from blackmirror
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This is such I great idea. I hope she makes it back to Bill and Ellen though. Maybe Merrick can help to subvert the system? Can't wait for her to meet Dean with his attitude to girls and kick his ass either.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Not sure if there will be a conversation bewteen Buffy and Ellen anytime soon. And well, Bill's supposed to die May 16th, 1995 according to Supernatural timeline, which I'm gonna stick with.
Buffy/Dean-age is more my focus at the moment, so don't worry about that :D
Review By [blackmirror] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 The Watcher’s Council" from dracoluvr
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its not bad but i dont like the way u took her from them an the whole council, ugh, jerks, all of em.
Comments from author:
Thanks :D just recall Buffy S7 when Quintin and the rest of them were blown up, might help satisfy some anger towards them.
Review By [dracoluvr] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 The Watcher’s Council" from AllenPitt
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they may end up with a well trained slayer, but it'll be a slayer who hates them. Not a very smart move ...I wonder if Merrick dying during the fight with Lothos is going to be entirely an accident or like the scene with Angel and the roomful of lawyers in the cellar: "Somehow I just can't seem to care..."
Comments from author:
Well I've written chapters 3, 4 and 5 and I'm going with something different. I'm also concidering not going with the movie way of Merrick but with Josh's way: Merrick killed himself to prevent him from becoming a vampire. Only not exactly like that... I've got a lot to write before I reach that point since where I am now, Buffy's still not the slayer where I am. You'll see...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 The Watcher’s Council" from Kittysgotclaws
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wow.. really cool chapter.. you know I hated the council before this but now.. i just hate it ten times more.. can't wait for more:)
Comments from author:
Lol, well the Council is cruel in its arcane ways. Thanks for reviewing :D
Review By [Kittysgotclaws] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 The Watcher’s Council" from Aeryn
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I hope to see some bloody revenge taken on the council in later chapters. Pls update again soon. What about Christmas, you say? Forget that, it comes every year, so write instead!
Oh, alright! Enjoy your Christmas while I wait patiently for more story. :)
Comments from author:
lol, well I've written chapters 3, 4 and 5. They're all at my beta's who is really busy so it might be a while.
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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