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Review of chapter "Watching, Listening and Observing..." from WolfWriter
Review:
Warm as in roasting? For some reason, I see fricaseed reptile in the poor schlub's future. I really like this story.

You're going with classic V right? Not that other show with the same name.
Comments from author:
'V', as in the 'original mini-series' and possibly the 'final battle'... Not that cheap tripe show that came after which focused 'way' too much on the star child... :p
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Watching, Listening and Observing..." from Ramenth
Review:
Interesting story so far, I look forward to seeing where this will go. One thing that I'm somewhat confused by is the role of the non V cross over. We know it's Jackson, but without some context it's hard to figure out what he's doing there. You say it's prestargate, but Daniel wasnt actually involved in the Giza dig. He was teaching/failing at convincing people of his theories, wasnt he?
Comments from author:
I'll be expounding on Jackson's role later, but I figured that as a linguist with a specialty in Ancient Egyptian in particular, it's a good bet that he spent some time in Egypt pre-Stargate. More detail will come later... ;)
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Visiting? Yeah Right!" from LordSia
Review:
Oh, this is good! Do continue, it has some potential. Nice characters, powerful but not #powerful#, if it makes any sense. Mortal Heroes? Something like that.
Comments from author:
Yeah, this one is definitely going with our heroes as the underdogs overall. The only true advantages they have are suspicious minds and a long experience with guerilla warfare...

;)
Review By [LordSia] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Visiting? Yeah Right!" from xducare
Review:
dude awsome story write more soon
Comments from author:
Updated now... ;)

Glad you are enjoying it...
Review By [xducare] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Visiting? Yeah Right!" from TTrunks
Review:
Cool, I can't wait for more, but I wonder what aliens your useing.
Comments from author:
As of this moment, the only aliens I'm using are the Visitors from V.

I may, however, bring in Stargate aliens later, depending on how I let this play out... ;)
Review By [TTrunks] • Date [5 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Visiting? Yeah Right!" from Wolflady
Review:
Missed this the first time around, so I got both chapters at once. Great start! I really hope it won't be so long before the next one, though.
Comments from author:
*winces*

Yeah, I'm afraid you had to wait longer then you'd hoped. I hope to do better now. I only hope my latest chapter was worth the wait...

Jasper
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [28 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Visiting? Yeah Right!" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
I'm glad your back. V is one of my favorite mini-pseries of all time. I hope you continue.
Comments from author:
I intend to...
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [5 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Visiting? Yeah Right!" from WolfWriter
Review:
YAY! It's back!

How ya been? I was wondering when this little blurb would be updated.

Love it so far. Are you going to show the reactions of the other members of the Council, i.e. Giles, Buffy, and especially Willow?

Her magical senses would tell her that these people are not to be trusted in any way, shape or form.

Love it, love it, love it!!!!
Comments from author:
*grins*

Glad you're happy. Sorry, but I have a nasty tendency to jump randomly from project to project, so often some get lost in the shuffle... I'll try to be more aware of that...

As for other reactions, I'll be getting to them... ;)

Jasper
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [5 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Visiting? Yeah Right!" from Fyrloche
Review:
*grins* I like it. Watched every episode of V when it was on. Have to say that I particularly enjoyed the first and second mini-series and the first season. The second season kinda sucked. And the ending was pitiful. Left very wideopen in the hope that it would get enough attention to get back for another season. I always wondered what the V enemy looked like and what kind of alien it would be. I had the thought that they would be some kind of predatory avian. *chuckles* It was funny to see Robert Englund in his role as the bumbling Visitor who falls for a human and changes sides. Are you going to have a similar character?
Comments from author:
Perhaps... As for the Visitors enemy, I've got big news for all you V fans...

There are hints about someone putting V: the Second Generation on TV at some point. If you have not read Kevin Johnson's book then I suggest you give it a whirl. I'll give you a quick headstart. The 'Final Battle' events never happened. Fast forward a few years. That's V: the Second Generation... ;)
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [5 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Visiting? Yeah Right!" from IrnBruOrDeath
Review:
THis really interesting so far, I hope you ontinue soon.

Can't wait to see/read/whatever Xander and co kicking some scaly alien ass!

Yay for the inclusion of Daniel Jackson. Will O'neill or my personal fave T'ealc be making an appearance?

Hope there's more soon

IBOD
Comments from author:
O'Neill maybe, though not likely a big role. This is centred on Africa, after all... As for Teal'c... not for a long time, if at all...
Review By [IrnBruOrDeath] • Date [5 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Humble Carpenter" from Ramenth
Review:
Interesting, though I'm completely confused as to why Jackson and Carter are working with Xander... out of africa.
Comments from author:
Jackson is working with Xander... Carter, not so much...
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [5 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Humble Carpenter" from micedden
Review:
love the start wood like the see more
Comments from author:
I'm working on the next part. I'll try to post ASAP...

Jasper
Review By [micedden] • Date [19 Dec 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Humble Carpenter" from malaskor
Review:
Interesting start. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Oh and one little bit that confused me:

"... Zabuto could only truly be confused of allowing Kendra..."

shouldn't that be:

"... Zabuto could only truly be accused of allowing Kendra..."
Comments from author:
Ach... Good catch...

Thanks for that

Jasper
Review By [malaskor] • Date [7 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Humble Carpenter" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great opening, well done.
Comments from author:
My thanks
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Humble Carpenter" from ophite
Review:
I liked the start, I hope you do more on this one.
Comments from author:
I'd better...

I'd be more then a little disappointed in myself if I didn't...

Jasper
Review By [ophite] • Date [7 Dec 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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