Very good story. It's a lot of characters to keep track of though. Who's who and all that.
I hope you get all your readers back. I know I broke up one of my stories and lost most of my readers too.
One note: The head of the WC is Travers, not Travis.
I'm still trying to figure out what's up with Orochimaru. (don't tell me. I like to be surprised.)
Also if you are starting Season 3 soon, I just want to make one point. In "Revelations", Gwen Post claims Lagos is after the Glove of Mynhegon. Watch the episode again and note that Lagos never attacks the Slayers. He only defends himself against their attacks. The slayers definitely got the wrong demon that day. I would love it if Lagos becomes an ally when you get to that episode. Though, I don't think he said a word during the episode. Maybe he doesn't speak English?
Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Interesting ideal. Will definitly have to pass that on. And please, if you have any other ideals, please sent them. And thanks for pointing that out about his name. Lastly, if things look like they are going south, please help us out there too. We don't want the story to turn bad and loss you all.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Very nice job on ending this story, I hope to read the next one soon.
-How many sequel might you do? What are you familiar with the series' "Bleach" and/or "One Piece"?
-I never got a e-mail back.
Comments from author:
Sorry, my falt with the e-mail. If all goes well, six stories. I read the lastest Bleach manga on line every week, and see the lastest sub and dub anime of it every week also. One Piece is limited though. Were you surprised about Kit?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm looking for you and I'm having withdrawal symptoms
I lied to you
Ride on shooting star
I continued singing
like a shotgun with all my heart
Comments from author:
Wow, this is a first. Someone "sung" to me. You loved it that much? Wow. Just... wow. We will try not to disappoint as we continue this story. And thank you for reading.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Giles HAS more control than that, he's deliberately being uber-Jiraiya to have James facedesking.
To the author--
Good god, you have talent! These people are certainly showing their characteristics in a steady fashion, and it's a hell of a good show. Thanks again.
Comments from author:
That too, for the first part. As for the second, its a 50 50 split between me and my co-author, so half of the praise goes to him. So from him and me, thank you. And I'm hopping the charactor blend to be somewhere between 70/30 and 60/40, Buffy charactor to Naruto charactor.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [10 May 11] • Not Rated
*facedesks repeatedly* ONLY Jiraiya would think about that in his situation. Honestly, I thought Giles had more self-control than that.
A good read, as always, and I can't wait for the next one! Hopefully you'll keep everything together this time around!
Comments from author:
Who would you rather have more in control in a time like that, you or someone of Juraiya's caliber? And compared to Jiraiya, Giles has much more control then Jiraiya will ever have.
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [10 May 11] • Not Rated
