Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

The Hidden Hand

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "25" from RHatch
Review:
awesome!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "24" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the take of the ghosts, I hope to read more soon.

-After Buffy sees Glies take what she thinks is one too many blows to the head have her say "Mom, can you please try to not kill Giles or give him brain damage?"
Comments from author:
I hope to be able to work on the next chapter soon myself. And had to laught a little on that. I think I will try to put it somewhere.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "24" from RHatch
Review:
yay...... anew chappie!!!!
Comments from author:
Glad your enjoying it.
Review By [RHatch] • Date [20 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "23" from race
Review:
(GROWLING) WRITE MORE! (Puppy dog eyes) Please?
Comments from author:
Don't worry, the next chapter is about half done. If all goes right, it will be done in a week or two.
Review By [race] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from Mordare
Review:
Must say I am really enjoying this one so far.
Comments from author:
I hope we continue to please.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "23" from JediKnight
Review:
Good work on the update, I hope you'll be adding more soon.

-When might you use some of the ideas you and I t6alked about?
Comments from author:
If all goes well, in 2 to 3 weeks. And sorry, but what ideals?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "23" from RHatch
Review:
yay!!!! an update...
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the new chapter, I hope to read more soon.

-I haven't heard from you since 9/14/2010.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And I did return your last email. Don't know what happen, so sent me another.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from RHatch
Review:
awesome chappy
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from JediKnight
Review:
It was very funny, and I look forward to more soon.

-Why have Harmony/Ino fall for Giles/Jiraiya?
Comments from author:
As my co-author said, "Has it ever been done before?" Though most likely it won't go anywere, so at the minamum, it will make things interesting, and funny. And it just seem funny.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on the update, I'm hoping that you'll be posting more soon.

-I'm going to say the interrogation was either the Watchers or Gypsies.
Comments from author:
Will try. And I will say if you get it right or not in the next chapter.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from Doraemax
Review:
Hahaha.. .you best yet. Thank you for giving a 'naruto' version of the 'love spell' episode!! so, funny. I can't help but replacing the scoobies with their naruto counterpart. Just imagine, the whole thing happens in naruto-verse. The scene with Dawn vs buffy... perfect!!!

Truly, your story is one of the few that manage to successfully integrate naruto-verse and buffy. Kudos! More! More! More!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. I hope we will continue to please you.
Review By [Doraemax] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from Cristina
Review:
So Amy is not affected is she?

And this chapter was hilarious, instead of Xander asking for the love spell for Cordy, it was Harmony and Willow.

LOL

And Buffy didn't end up as a rat...Xander did. LOL

Loved the chapter....so its Jenny preoccupied with her Gypsy tribe problem?
Comments from author:
I will be evil and make you wait for the next chapter. And as for Jenny and her tribe, it will be address in future chapters. And I am glad you enjoyed this chapter. I hope we will continue to make it a good read for you. Will try to get the next one out as soon as possible, but it might be a few weeks.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from JediKnight
Review:
Why a cliffhanger? Other than that; great job and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Its called we had to stop somewhere. Plus it does make you want to read more, doesn't?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Review:
I really don't like the way you killed off the rhino demon.

From what I could tell it had done nothing wrong there.

All it did was eat candy bars, watch tv, goof around.
Comments from author:
It was a case of wrong place, wrong time. And they didn't know it was peaceful either and had to act quickly to make sure it didn't get away. Plus remember that they had to keep Giles and his friend save. There will always be innocent beings caught in the crossfire. Plus you can't save everybody. Though you can blame my co-author for coming up with the that demon. We wanted something big and powerful for it to take hold of and that is what he came up with. And after I read that part through, it looked fine to me. Though now that I think about, I do feel sorry for it. I hope this dosn't discourage you from reading the rest. Please continue to read and review! Will be looking forward to the next one.
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [12 May 10] • Not Rated
start back Page: 2 of 5 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking