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Review of chapter "10" from superbrutal
Review:
Poor, poor Giles having a crazy ninja who like to do a "dance" to announce himself.

good chapter
Comments from author:
Ya, my co-author couldn't help it. He just had to write it down. Thanks for the review!
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
Review:
That was an azwsome update! I think you've managed to get Gaara/Oz perfect! They're so similar in so many ways that it just seems to work perfectly! You mentioned something about getting more ninjas on the team. If you need more does that mean taht you'll use some characters from 'Angel'? I think that Lindsey McDonald would make a GREAT ninja!!! You could even pair him with Ms Calendar or Joyce! That'd be really cool. There is one thing that I'm wondering though. Will Giles be with Ms C like before Halloween or will he go for Joyce like his inner ninja is telling him to. If Giles does end up with Joyce then that would mean that Miss Callender would be free to be paired with Lindsey. You have to admit that that would be a great paring and who knows! Angel and Lindsey might actually be able to get along!!!!! PLEASE considder it!
Anyways, LOVED the update and can't wait for the next one! PLEASE make it quick!!!!! (Not the chapter, the time taken to write the chapter)
Comments from author:
I am glad to see you so excited about our story. I will to tell you this, there will be people getting involved from the Angel series. I just will not say who at this time. And you bring up an interesting pairing question. We will have to think on that one to see who goes with who. And we will try hard to get the next chapter out as fast as possible. And thanks for the review!
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [22 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "9" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting chapter you posted, I hope you'll be able to add he next one soon.

Who will they find for new ninjas?
Comments from author:
Thanks, and you will just have to see.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "9" from superbrutal
Review:
I still don't trust the robot making snake boy, but i guess only time will tell.

Nice job.
Comments from author:
And as you can tell, neither do they still. And thanks!
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
Review:
That chapter was AWSOME!!!!!!!!!
I LOVED teh little bit at the end!!!!! It'd be azwsome fi they could really do that in the fic but they can't cuz they're ninjas and not saiyans. I just couldnt' stop my giggles and I don't giggle easily!
Anyways, I LOVED the fight scenes! You wrote the fight really well. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
I am glad you like the chapter. And it helps to be a black belt in martial arts to make the sceens look cool and make sence at the same time. And you can thank my co-author for the last little bit. He is great for the funny stuff. We seem to complament each other well. And I thought it was funny as well when he wrote that out. : )
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [11 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8" from JediKnight
Review:
Good work on the new chapter, I'm hoping that you'll hve time to write more of this soon.

Looking forward to the talk with Warren.

Funny Omake.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And we will to tring to write more soon!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8" from superbrutal
Review:
lol, nice chapter.

Looks like Warren with Oorchimaru added on is like soaking matches in gasoline, trouble is just bound to happen.
Comments from author:
Ya, things are really going to get interesting now.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [11 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
Review:
Oh my goddess! That was awsome! Grrr! I HATE Orochimaru/Warren! He or THEY are such jerks!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait to read what happens with the initiative! Will Ms Callender tell the group about being a Gypsy cuz I can see trouble in the future cuz the clan is bound to be pissed off that Angel isn't a vamp anymore and cna be perfectly happy without havin' to worry about losin] his soul again. They're gunna be REALLY mad!Will any characters from the 'Angel' series be in this? I REALLY like Lindsey McDonald for some reason adn he's be a really cool adition to the group! Will Wesley show up? I can just imagine his face when he sees all the ninja stuff! I bet he'd wet himself! At least Giles and Joyce will be able to whip him and Lindsey into shape! -grins- I can just imagine their training now. If he was a shinobi do you think that Wesley might be Iruka-sensei? I'm not sure who else he could be cuz I'll admit taht my knowledge of anything Naruto related is pretty limited. Will Ethan try anything like bringing back any other shinobi? I would bet a lot that he'll try to get Itachi to their world. That guy has serious issues and I'm sure that OrochimaruWarren wouldn't mind him being there iether.
Will you PLEASE update soon?! I REALLY wanna know what's gunna happen next and it's not like I can just look into the future and find out what's gunna happen cuz I'm not a mega-witch like Willow so I'll ask again PLEASE update soon! Pretty please with sugar, ice-cream, chocolate, strawberries and sprinkles on top!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
I don't know, it might take a while. (Grins!) I am glad you like it so much. And don't worry, we will be have people from Angel showing up. And we will be deeling with the Councel and the Gypsys. And as for Orochimaru/Warren, lets just say I hope you will be surprised on how we do them. And Ethan will be back, and that is all I will say about that. Sorry, don't want to give anything away.
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [2 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on the update, I like how Joyce intimidated the last demon.
When will we find out who paid The Order of Teraka for the attack?
Comments from author:
Thanks! And you will just have to wait till the next chapter to see what all will be revealed.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from superbrutal
Review:
This was a very enjoyable chapter, lots of action and original parts to the plot.

I like it very much.
Comments from author:
Thanks! We have be working to this point in time to were it really started to break off from Buffy. I hope we will continue to write in such a way that you will enjoy it.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from Shadohime
Review:
I like what you're doing here. And I can't wait until Warren/Orochimaru is discovered and revealed for the traitor he is. So, is anything else going to be done with Oz, Andrew, and Kendra, our three jinchurikki?
Comments from author:
We hope to show progress for them all. And as for Warren, re-read the last part in the last chapter of a Shinobi Halloween very carfully to see what is really happening with Warren/Orochimaru.
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting chapter, I'm hoping you'll be able to add more to the story soon.

-What might you do next chapter?
Comments from author:
Thanks! And you will just have wait and see! And we have FIVE!!!!! DING DING DING! We have a winner! And it will be contiued now!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thanks! Four.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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