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Review of chapter "6" from (Recent Donor)wolframhart
Review:
You said you wanted five reviews to continue. Here is one. I enjoy following your story and hope to see it continue. For the sake of balance I hope to see higher power enemies appearing soon.
Comments from author:
First, thanks for the review, and if you have read the latest chapter, you will see that they are coming. It just takes time to set up the really good bad guys. Three.
Review By [(Recent Donor)wolframhart] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6" from JarethLeonine
Review:
I'd say this is coming along well, my only gripe is the character focus seems so spread out. It'd be nice to see some snippets in every chap dedicated to a few different characters and how they're progressing in dealing with their new abilities and skills. Other than that tho, I'd give it two thumbs up. keep it coming
Comments from author:
What were tring to do was have some charactors be more in the spot light more then other for each episode. Like one team for one chapter and another team another so we could show how everyone was going. Though it seems like we are not doing so well in that department. And we have been showing some progress, with Oz for example, though we should show more, so thanks for that tidbit! And thanks for the Review. Two.
Review By [JarethLeonine] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from superbrutal
Review:
I really enjoy this fic, and would hate to see you stop writing.

I look forward to another chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks! It was just like, review, review, review, from the last story, and then like, hardly nothing for this one. I was beginning to wander what we were doing wrong. And that is one.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from JediKnight
Review:
Good adaptation of the episode, I'm hope the other chapters based on episodes will be just as good.
So, is Ted original recipe or extra crispy?
Comments from author:
Probably more along the line of extra crispy. And thanks for the review. And as always, if you see some way to improve or have an ideal, please let us know.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [16 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the update, hoping to read more when you can post it.
Who are/were James and Elizabeth?
Comments from author:
They appeared in Season 2 Ep. 1 of Angle, I think, and James I know for sure was a follower of Angle during his bad days in Europe. And thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the new chapter, I hope you'll post more soon.
Could you tell me who Elizabeth and James are?
When will the "Naruto" characters get pulled into the "Buffy" world?
Comments from author:
You will find out in the next chapter. And not to sure about the second, but I am almost 100% sure that it will happen. And thanks for the review!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Vld
Review:
My guess is the two vamps from... i think it was the beginning of season two of Angel, when Angel kills the woman who recognizes him, and James is the one who uses a ritual involving getting his heart ripped out to gain near-invincibility for something like 24 hours. I'm not sure, though, since i don't remember their names.
Comments from author:
I will wait to see if anyone else gives an answer before I say if you are right or not. I will give when we get out the next chapter. And thanks for reviewing and reading the story!
Review By [Vld] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks again!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from Vld
Review:
I'm starting to like your Warren, he's wicked, but good... which makes it even worse, knowing when he's alseep Orochi-teme can come out to play. I wonder how that'll turn out?
Comments from author:
You will just have to wait and see. BWA, HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!
Review By [Vld] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from JediKnight
Review:
Good work on the new update, I'm looking forward to more.
Do you need advice or help on anything?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
hehe. excellent so far.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
You were right, this was a nice surprise. Hoping to read more soon.
What "Naruto" characters might you drop in Sunnydale?
Comments from author:
Thanks! And not sure at the moment.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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