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Review of chapter "17" from JediKnight
Review:
The end of the chapter was freaking hilarious. I'm hoping that you'll beable to post more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And let's just say that things are going to get interesting.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [7 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the new chapter, I'm hooping that you'll be posting more soon.

-Any chance of showing some of the friendship Naruto and Haku had between Andrew and Drusilla?
Comments from author:
We forgot about that. So many people to write that some things might get left out by accident. We will try to have some of that friendship in the future. And thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the chapter, my only complaint is the cliffhanger. Please do your best to add more soon.

Any plans for pairings yet?
Comments from author:
Sorry about that, we were kind of in a hurry to get that chapter out. And we will try to get the next chapter out as soon as possible. Yes, we have some parrings in the work.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [25 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14" from JediKnight
Review:
Good work on the new chapter, I'll be looking forward to more.

Will we ever see them during school?
Comments from author:
Thanks! And I believe we have done some seens were they are in school.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from Shadohime
Review:
*sigh* Typical Sunnyhell goodness. Well done, as always. Something I've noticed in regards to Dawn/Hinata: She's a lot more outspoken and confident than Hinata is in the canon, even in Shippuden. I'm assuming this is because Dawn came out as the dominant personality in the relationship, but you should still have her have some nervous moments, especially around Andrew. Just a thought. :3
Comments from author:
I believe we have put some of that in there, Dawn/Hinata. If we haven't enough, we will try to put some more in, but ya, there should be a little more Hinata in there. And the Buffy charactors are the dominate personality.
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "13" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the new chapter, very funny for most of it.

Can't wait to find out what you'll do with The Judge.
Comments from author:
That you will find out soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the new chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more of this when you can get to it.
Comments from author:
Thank! And we will keep trying our best!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from Cristina
Review:
:) I'm so happy...two chapters.

You two did great job...again .

My favorite line was Xander's “The only time we get promoted is when they don’t want to deal with the greenhorns. Figures. You know, if Shikamaru were here, he’d say it was troublesome. But since he is not here, I’ll say it for him: Troublesome!”

LOL

I like Shikamaru.
Comments from author:
Shikamaru is one of my favorites too. I just wish I was as smart as him. And thanks for the reviews! Please keep them coming! Also any suggestions/ideals will be appreciated. But no garrenty we will use them though.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
Review:
Nicely updated. I liked the tortu-training thing at the end! That was cruel but oh so good! James is putting together the Judge right? Well, this is certainly gunna be interesting.
Great update, can't wait for the next one!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
Review:
Nicely done. I enjoyed reading the chapter. The littlb bit at the end was funny as always. I'd have LOVED to see that in the show!!!!! Hay, I just started my own fic. Do you think you could look over it and comment on it? It's a Buffy/Yu-Gi-Oh crossover sorta thing with some more added in later. I'd really appreciate it.
Good luck eith your next chapter. I can't wait to read it!!!!! Will teh gypsy clan be coming to check thing sout any time soon? Now THAT will be interesting!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Will try to look into it. We will get on the next chapter as soon as possible. And you will just have to wait and see about the gypsy clan. ; )
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "11" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on your new chapter, please do your best to add more soon.

Your Omake was funny.

Will Buffy be telling Owen in a chapter what characters from "Naruto" she, her friends and family dressed as?
Comments from author:
Thanks! And you will have to thank my co-author again for the Omake. And most like Owen will be told "off camra".
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10" from Cristina
Review:
well I just managed to read this a while ago, but didn't reviewed...instead I did go and watched Naruto, (I don't read manga if I can avoid it-moving pictures way better :P ) so that I know what characters are those Ninja.

Anyway now that I (somewhat) know the Naruto character (I'm at the episode 101, which is really funny and very good...and a filler episode, pity that), I must say you did very well with a blending of personalities.

I'm so tracking this story.

I'm kinda hoping that Warren will get out of this without dying or totally becoming Orochimaru.
out of curiosity....what is Major of Sunnydale thinking about current situation, shinobi could(would) put big problem in his Ascension plans.
Comments from author:
First, thank you for reading our story, and also going the extra mile in watching Naruto so you would understand. I sugjuest that you try to get into the Shippuden as soon as possible so that you will understand more that is going on. Second, you will also have to thank my co-author also. It is a joint effort. For Warren, you will just have to read and see. : ) Last, we have plans for the Mayor that we hope will make things interesting.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [18 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
Review:
Awsome update! James is gunna summon the Judge isn't he? That is SO gunna be a problem if I'm right!
I'm a little curius. Will there be other crossovers or will it just be Buffy and Naruto.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the AWSOME work!!!!!
Oh, and PLEASE keep up the little bits at the ned! They're HILLARIOUS!!!!!
Comments from author:
For other crossovers, my co-author has brought that up, but I think we have our plate full with what we have. So most likely not. If we do it, at the most, one or two others, from one or two other series. But don't get your hopes up. And as for the stuff at the end, all the credit goes to my co-author. I am sure he can come up wtih something at the end of each chapter, but no garenties. And thanks for reviewing!
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on the new update, Please do your best to post more when you can.

Any idea when you might use my idea on Willow's parents?
Comments from author:
That is still up in the air. But we have talked about it. I think I got everything straighted out, so we should be back on putting it out every one to two weeks, but most likely two. And thanks!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from superbrutal
Review:
Poor, poor Giles having a crazy ninja who like to do a "dance" to announce himself.

good chapter
Comments from author:
Ya, my co-author couldn't help it. He just had to write it down. Thanks for the review!
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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