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Review of chapter "Buffy and the New Blood" from Ramenth
Review:
An interesting fic, but your tense choice is a bit annoying.
Comments from author:
Hey, Ramenth Thanks for the review, glad you think it interesting. Sorry about the choice I intend to change it in the next season stories. Thanks again.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Bus Ride" from angelus
Review:
I'm guessing Brian is the annointed one right or is Brian a new character that you created
Comments from author:
Yeah, Brian is the anointed one. as I watched again I never remember them naming him so I just decided to name him Brian. If you Know different let me know and I'll change it. Thanks. Hey Angelus, Sorry I made a major flub. did some research and found out the boys name was Collin, don't know how I missed that one. Maybe cause I was not a big fan of the Anointed one plot line. oops so sorry.
Review By [angelus] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy, Bugs and Egg Sacks, Oh My." from (Past Donor)mpop
Review:
You killed warren this early?!
Great.
Looking forward to moore.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I have a different path in mind for Willow, and Warren is not a part of that. Just my muse. Thanks for the review
Review By [(Past Donor)mpop] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy, Bugs and Egg Sacks, Oh My." from angelus
Review:
interesting to see what happens next especially since you just killed that bastard Warren no future robot sex toys for him lol
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm so glad that you find it interesting. I just wanted to get rid of Warren as I have no intention on having him taint our scooby gang in any way.
Review By [angelus] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The New Girl" from Iriai
Review:
Oh, that's interesting. I haven't seen this happen before. The real world girl getting sucked in and actually becoming a part of the story by not actually having first-hand knowledge, just feelings. Should make her stand out in a supernaturally believable and canon-ish way, yet not make her a total outsider by making the cast feel like freaks who are merely part of a story. Lol. I can't wait to see how you develop her. Update soon!
Comments from author:
Oh I'm so glad you like it. That's what I was going for to try to integrate her into the scooby's life effortlessly. But their will be some conflict don't know when but it will be some. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Iriai] • Date [26 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy and the New Blood" from Alyssara
Review:
I think this is the most interesting "Mary Sue" fic I've ever run across...keep it up!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Alyssara] • Date [11 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy and the New Blood" from bigreader
Review:
interesting begining, a fan gets dropped into buffy verse. I'd like to see how you will pull that of.
What is this bit about watcher, will she be a watcher like giles, something else?

Keep going, but watch the prounouns, some of the grammer was a bit wrong.
Comments from author:
Thanks, working on that, hopefully getting better.
Review By [bigreader] • Date [10 Dec 08] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy and the New Blood" from tactless
Review:
Oddly enough, and unlike many people, I have no problem what so ever with self insert fics. Just remember two things.

1: Do not take anything too seriously.
and
2: Be honest with who YOU are.

Myself: I'm pretty sure I would be vamp chow in the BTVS universe in a matter of minutes :)

You have my attention and I wish you the best with this.
Review By [tactless] • Date [10 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy and the New Blood" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Umm...what was that?
Comments from author:
My muse. LOL
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [10 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy and the New Blood" from KzintiKiller
Review:
You know, I've seen a lot of Mary Sue fic....but I always wondered what would happen if someone didn't play around, but simply threw a fan into the canon with no horsing around. That scene with Cordy talking to her out of the screen was eerily reminiscent of "The Game".

You've got my attention. I'm interested to see where you take this.

KK
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the review. I have so many interesting ideas for this fic and I hope you like it in the future.
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [10 Dec 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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