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Review of chapter "Graduation" from (Recent Donor)ElessarNett
Review:
A brilliant ending to a brilliant story. I can hardly wait for the next installment to begin. Thank you so much for putting so much of your time into creating something for all of us out here in Harry Potter/Buffy fandomland to enjoy, and here's hoping for an even better showing in the sequel!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much, and I'm glad I did! The sequel be more action-filled, and also, sadder and with a lot of plot-points. Let's hope I can keep track of them all! :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)ElessarNett] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Graduation" from FireWolfe
Review:
Nicely done and I can hardly wait to see the sequel.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Only a few more days left now...!
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forwards" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Ah! No!! I really hate it when I get to the end of one of your chapters... I just want to keep reading!!

Loved that the Snape/Lily moment happened, and the Buffy/Remus.

Oh Peter... *oohlala* Living together? Bom chicka bom bom! haha, its super weird to think of Peter Pettigrew living with a girl... and all the carnal things involved with that. Haha, just keep seeing the guy from the movie in my head ;)

More Please!! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!! :)
Comments from author:
Haha, well, they have to end sometime. ;) I really liked writing the Buffy/Remus and the Lily/Severus scene - I find their friendship/love really interesting, though I am a Lily/James fan all the way! As for Peter - yes, it is rather odd, isn't it? But luckily for me, I don't picture the guy who portrays him in the movies when I write him *shudders* or I don't think I could stomach doing a 'nice' Peter at all. My Road of Innocence Peter hasn't spent twelve years as a rat, nor is he a Death Eater, so I imagine he's not quite that ugly. ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [29 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Forwards" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
Loved it!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [28 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forwards" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I love this chapter!
Buffy scolding Remus was too cute.

Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you! Remus does need someone to scold him sometimes, and who better than Buffy?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Forwards" from AllenPitt
Review:
Strange to think of Buffy as focusing on healing as a career, but she was only the slayer out of duty, ie it wasn't a career choice after all.
Still hoping for a return to Sunnydale even if only briefly at some point---after all Faith will need help protecting her sister, Dawn
Comments from author:
Perhaps it is strange, and yet, perhaps not: After all healing too is about saving/helping people protecting them, and at least in my mind, I think Buffy would enjoy helping people without having to kick someone's arse to do it. As for Sunnydale - I really can't tell you what I have planned (sorry!) you'll just have to be patient.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Forwards" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awesome chapter!!!!!! I love this story!
Comments from author:
Thank you: I'm glad you found the chapter enjoyable!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sorry" from winnie
Review:
I have to agree with others, I hope this continues, its good.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [winnie] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sorry" from nightshadowlife
Review:
amazing chapter!!! I love this story soo much!!!! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [16 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sorry" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Yay! Sirius is back with Mandy!

I liked how you had Samantha reflecting on her friendless life... Only to get a surprise birthday party!

Especially like how we see Peter start to slowly descend into badness...But I REALLY appreciate how he knows he can't turn on his friends of 7 years at the drop of a hat. Lovely work.

Love this story but I am very curious as to where you are going... In HP books there's always a Big Bad, of sorts. Is your story going to end with the end of the school year? Or will it go straight into them fighting Voldemort's forces?

Don't get me wrong- I'm loving the journey. Just curious as to the destination.

Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
:D I couldn't possible keep Mandy and Sirius apart for ever, nor could I not have a surprise birthday party somewhere in my story...it might be slightly cliche, but it works!

I am so happy you like how Peter's development is going - I'm really doing my best to keep it as realistic as possible.

As for where this is going...you could say this story lays the groundwork for the continuation: That is, it develops everyone's relationship, personalities, growing up, becoming more aware of the dangers of the war and their opinion of it and so on, and it will end after Graduation. It sets up a base of sorts for the sequel (Road of Carnage).

The sequel is where I will have to use what the characters have learnt about each other and themselves in this story, as well as becoming more involved with the war and how that changes them... (Buffy will play a much larger part) And there will be a lot more twists and plot development, as well as a Big Bad, of course, in this case, Voldemort...and also, the marauder's own doubt as the war takes its toll on them.

I hope that satisfy your curiosity! It's far from over!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [13 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Believe" from nightshadowlife
Review:
wow, I had no idea you were gonna have two couples one broke up and one not doing very well.. *pout* I wish Remus would come back to Hogwarts!!!!
Amazing chapter!!!
Comments from author:
Well, I had to add some conflict! lol. All relationships can't be a dance on roses all the time, after all. As for Remus - time will tell!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Believe" from FireWolfe
Review:
Sirius is an idot. Nicely done chapter. It is sad he messed up. Peter is showing the first signs of not being a team player. Yet I wonder if it is because he is truly afraid and has to process his own feelings. I do not believe anyone decides to betray ones friends at the drop of a hat. It has to be a process of issolation and apathy. I like this story even if Buffy is not her typical self. I look forward to seeing where it will go.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Believe" from FireWolfe
Review:
Sirius is an idot. Nicely done chapter. It is sad he messed up. Peter is showing the first signs of not being a team player. Yet I wonder if it is because he is truly afraid and has to process his own feelings. I do not believe anyone decides to betray ones friends at the drop of a hat. It has to be a process of issolation and apathy. I like this story even if Buffy is not her typical self. I look forward to seeing where it will go.
Comments from author:
Yes, Sirius can be a bit of a prat, can't he? And regarding Peter, I don't believe he just decided to betray his friends just like that either, which is why I'm trying to show his thoughtprocess and what leads up to it - if it happens. ;) As for Buffy's characterisation - she's actually the person I have most trouble with, but in the sequel, I believe she is much more present/her usually quippy-self.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Believe" from AllenPitt
Review:
Am I a bad person for hoping Buffy ends up back in Sunnydale, but with a wand, able to apparate, all that stuff? She'd kick ass! And help against the mayor. Maybe return to HP-land 10+ years later. Or something.
I sure hope Sirius gets back with Mandy. It'd help if he had somebody after Azkaban...assuming all that happens.
Comments from author:
No, not a bad person! It's a funny idea! You'll have to read on and wait to see what I decide to do. As for Sirius and Mandy - don't give up on them yet.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Believe" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Poor Siri! I hope he thinks of something. Flowers might help.

BTW wouldn't Buffy be able to help Moony on the full moon?
Soulmates and all that.
Comments from author:
Flowers may not do it this time - a little more effort might be necessary: Mandy is a stubborn/proud girl. And yes, Buffy would be able to help Moony, however, with her at Hogwarts, and him at home, that's not possible right now.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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