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Review of chapter "Interlude 1 - Testing the memory" from spring
Review:
Okay I love this chapter, I do have to make a note that in a prior chapter Dumbledore tried the mind reading thing and was thrown out rather quickly why would he try again? More soon please and good luck in finding a job.
Comments from author:
Um proberbly me not beang clear...
The end of this chapter was just before the test the other scene was just after the test.
Review By [spring] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude 1 - Testing the memory" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude 1 - Testing the memory" from eriktheviking
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A well written chapter with well thought-out magic. Probably needs to be inserted into the previous chapter or a a flashback scene.
Comments from author:
I'm thinking one interlude for every two normal story chapters each one will take a point of his new life growing up.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude 1 - Testing the memory" from zafaran
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This is *marvelous*. More, more, more, please. Xander teaming with Helsing always has potential to be fun in the most... entertaining way. Growing up with Integra as best friend means things could get very, very interesting in the future, especially with Xander remembering all the dealings with the Watcher's Council. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude 1 - Testing the memory" from LNR
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Awesome! Nice selections for a cross. More please.
Review By [LNR] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Very good start I can not wait for more.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [31 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from micedden
Review:
are you going to update soon
Comments from author:
Yes soon real life happened to me for a bit next chapter should be ready next week if all goes well
Review By [micedden] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from spring
Review:
I give you an eight because I see room for improvement and you are looking for a beta :-) I like what you have so far however the beggining of this is a bit confusing. more soon please
Review By [spring] • Date [9 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from ChiVayne
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You've added a Hellsing cross. Xander getting tips from Alucard? Hogwarts may not be left standing, what with Xander telling Snape that Potions is similar to cooking, and Xander's unique ideas on Defense Against the Dark Arts (like using his present from Integra). And throw the Weasley twins into the mix, and BOOM.
I wonder what advice this Xander would give the one growing up in Sunnydale?
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [5 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from Dreamweaver
Review:
I see our favorite Alexander Lavelle Harris has been a busy boy hasn't he?


Excerpt:

[“Xan promise to write to me while you are there. You are my only friend anywhere near my age.”]?


Not that I follow the Hellsing series or know that much about it, but from what little I do know, I'd bet that Xan's probably her only REAL friend 'cause I'd think that in her crowd, I don't know that anyone else'd dare call the imposing and powerful Sir Integra by the nic of "Tegs".


I can't wait to see what happens when he gets Hogwarts:

1. I want to see if his usual (or maybe UNusual?) run of luck with the ladies runs true to form.

2. I'm also eager to see how thestrals and Hagrids beasties and the other denizens of the area around Hogwarts will take to Xan, demon-magnet and Hyena Primal possesed guy that he is.

3. Considering that Hogwarts herself is semi-sentinent, I'm now especially curious about HER reaction to housing Xander.
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [5 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from mithrilandtj
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Soooo.... is Xan gonna be in the same year as Harry? Or is he gonna be ahead or behind?
Moody as a pseudo uncle... scary.

Can't wait for Xander in Snape's class. ;)
Comments from author:
his year? that is a spoiler :P

Snape's class is so many chapters away so I have no idea if they get on fine or hate each other yet. I'm deaning towards polite disliking with a bit of grudging respect but that may change on a moments notice.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [5 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from AllenPitt
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It's all fun and games now, but X. has some serious decisions facing him in the future. For one thing--should he stand by and do nothing when Buffy comes to Sunnydale? His best friend Jesse died in ep #1/2 after all...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from PsychoWing
Review:
Love the addition of Hellsing. That just affords more chances for chaos and humor.
Comments from author:
you have the right idea there :P
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [5 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from LordCorwin
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Nicely done on the background story .... just a weeeeeeeeeeeee bit of a small nit -- not really a nit .. just something that's simmer on the back burner .....
What's going on in SunnyD..... Are you going to tie in what happens in the "past/future" with the "current/future" ... and then we'll have a paradox ...
Does Xander stop himself from jumping and just shut the portal .. if he does, then he wouldn't have gone back to grow up, learn, come over and stop himself from jumping. What a time paradox ... hehe
Comments from author:
I'm thinking that he avoids SunnyD till at least book 5 as that would be buffy S1 I want to avoid thinking about Hellmouthy Paradoxs for a LONG time
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [5 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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