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Review of chapter "Chapter Two - All Grown Up" from micedden
Review:
love it
Review By [micedden] • Date [5 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from PsychoWing
Review:
"New Uncle Ethan." Love that. Things should certainly prove to be interesting (will his prior possessions still affect him?). I'm looking forward to how things will turn out - and am curious as to if Sunnydale will be in English Xander's future.
Comments from author:
I'm thinking along the lines of there still being some echo of the Hyena while Privet Harris is mostly faded.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from AllenPitt
Review:
So... this is the past in his own world? Could be fun as he can learn more magic, make some useful friends, and then show up in Sunnydale the day after the portal jumping...thing. And good old Ethan for an uncle. That is funny.....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from mokahi
Review:
Very interesting beginning. I am definately looking forward to seeing where you take this!
Review By [mokahi] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting idea... worth expanding...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from Genesis
Review:
this was a good start on a time traveling fiction for Xander. it would be very interesting that after Xander jumped he shows back up at the tower different and changed by his experience in the magical world.

keep it going.
Review By [Genesis] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Uncle Ethan? Oh NO!!!! lol
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from ChiVayne
Review:
So, he is in his past? And he has his memories?
Comments from author:
yes in the past and yes has his memories he is the same age and his double in Sunnydale
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Very interesting beginning! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from Tjin
Review:
a bit short, but interesting... I'll keep an eye on this one.

-Tjin
Comments from author:
more to come thats just the intro.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from Dreamweaver
Review:
In the next installment, I hope you give us a little more of a reaction than that from Xander for the new last name of "Rayne" and learning he's got Ethan for a blacksheep uncle. At the point in BTVS where ANYone is jumping off any towers for Dawnie would be during the Glorificus Arc. That's wwaaayyyyy after the Halloween episode where the Scoobies met Ethan.
Comments from author:
They met Ethan at least three times,
S2 Halloween
S3 candy turned adults into teenagers
S4 tuned Giles into a demon

right now he is on the run from Gringotts goblins until he pays them back if ever
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great start, and I am eagerly looking forward to how you develop the start. Well done & thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Into the breach" from rothos
Review:
Unfortunately I can't beta for you. But Good story and an interesting plot twist making him a Rayne so that would make Giles and Willow magical right?
Comments from author:
sort of Willow and Giles are from a completely different theoretical branches of magic different principals assumptions and stuff Willow is a mish mash I'm thinking for now Giles is a pure incantation mage (speaks spells others have written and no wand)
Ethan practices two branches (wand and incantation where he also makes his own spells)
Review By [rothos] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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