Fascinating. You've created something new and amazing. Thanks.
- Damia

Oh my god. Absolutely bloody amazing. I cannot wait for the sequel. You did a fabulous job with this, I can't believe I never thought of the pairing before. This was absolutely perfect.

I really hope the sequel cover's the teams reactions to Dawn/Ari and Elizabeth being Ari's daughter. I anticipate fireworks.

This looks to be a really interesting story. I've only recently gotten into NCIS and I can't wait to see how (or if) you bring those characters in. I hope to see more of this story and your others.

Interesting and different. I liked this view of both Dawn and Ari. Please do continue - there's so much that can be developed...

Wow. This is an excellent story, both on its own merits and as set-up for a longer work; the subject-matter is quite dark, really, but it's beautifully written, so the emotions feel honest instead of just melodramatic.

OMG!!!!!! Please write more, I absolutley love this!!!!! Ari and Dawn!!! You are a genius! More, please more.

You have an amazing gift for taking one character and showing so many possible facets in your different stories. Your Dawns are always different, but the way you present the story - the details you provide - make each Dawn plausible.

Can't wait to see more of this reality.

OH! Love it. I always had a bad boy attraction to Ari, despite the fact that I love Gibbs and Kate and totally sympathized with them. And Dawn! Finally! It's hard finding good Dawn fics where she's not a kid. I wonder how she's going to be treated by Gibbs' team. Will she meet Tony and get involved with him before he falls in love with Jeanne, daughter of "the Frog?"

this looks great. Can't wait to see where you take it. It is strange to have Dawn sooo mature.

Thanks so much.

BB

Wow!

A short story, but really a very, very good one! My only thought was WOW!

Definitely enjoyed reading....and I loved that it was complete unto itself!

wow..... love the concept would love to see more of this.

This is fantastic. Your writing is unhurried and riveting at the same time. I obviously enjoyed reading it very much. I hope you continue and get Dawn and the baby to DC somehow.

Chaja

That was awesome. I almost wanted to hate Dawn for falling for Ari, but I totally get why she did. You did an awesome job with both characters. Can't wait to see what happens next.

With no surprise, I love this fic. I think I read almost all your work -I guess you can call me fan. ^^

I particularly love Ari's portrait. He's a character I kind of hate but I have always found him interesting. The way you describe him made him a little bit more human, remind us that he had been before becoming a monster.

As for Dawn. She's one of my favorite character and yours is exactly like I appreciate her: grown-up and mature.

Now, I can't wait to read this new fic of you. But I hope to find also some e-mail telling me you have updated your other stories...