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Review of chapter "Chapter IV: Bella & Anne" from iissmrt
Review:
oooooh, any buffy pairings? possibly buffy/jacob? :}
Review By [iissmrt] • Date [28 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter IV: Bella & Anne" from Emeraldfire
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Can't wait till the next installment!!! I really wish she would remember her real name, "Anne" just doesn't suit her.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, she'll only be "Anne" for at least another chapter or so, hehehe ;)
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [28 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter IV: Bella & Anne" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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That was an awesome chapter. Though I am starting to wonder if Edward likes Buffy? Is this going to be a Bella X Jacob and a Buffy X Edward pairing? He is acting rather jealous, and very protective. Of course he is a very protective guy but I keep getting the feeling it is more than just brotherly/friendly in nature.
Comments from author:
I'm playing around with the idea of Edward feeling more for Buffy than just his kid sister that he needs to look out for, but we'll see how it'll go. Sometimes I think of one thing but the characters tends to take it another way for me so I'm left with having to redo what I initially planned to fit/suit what the characters wanted. -LoL-
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [28 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III: What the Hell Just Happened?" from TDWidow
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I love that Rosalie reminds her of Cordy. That's so fitting! (Or is it supposed to be Faith? I like Cordy better - she and Rosalie are closer)
Comments from author:
Yes, it was Cordy that Rosalie reminded Buffy of. :)
Review By [TDWidow] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III: What the Hell Just Happened?" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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Interesting chapter, it sounds like she doesn't even realize that she remembered something else because she was so upset. Maybe now that they have a better idea that she is aware of vampires they might be willing to be more open to them.

Also I was wondering, what is going on with the guys at the reservation. If they were the ones to find Buffy won't they be a little concerned about her living with the vampire clan? I am not positive but I swear that you had one of them help to bring Buffy in. or should I say Anne?

Loving it and very much looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Don't worry the guys from the reservation will come in to play as well, but remember they don't really like the Cullens? So until Bella's in the "know" about who or rather WHAT the Cullens really are, the liason the Cullens will have with the lycans won't materialize until some time later on.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [18 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III: What the Hell Just Happened?" from TuggyAngel
Review:
That Was Great!!!!!

Update Soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [TuggyAngel] • Date [18 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III: What the Hell Just Happened?" from Emeraldfire
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This is getting real good!!! Please continue soon!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [18 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter II: Hello, Anne!" from smellymonkey
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ooooo.....

update soon?!!!??!!!

pretty please with a cherry on top??

can't wait to see what's in store : )
Review By [smellymonkey] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter II: Hello, Anne!" from TuggyAngel
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Loved It!!!!!

Update Soon!!!!!!!
Review By [TuggyAngel] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter II: Hello, Anne!" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
hmm I wonder when Buffy is going to figure it out. I am guessing explanations will be coming for her soon, or possibly a side step and more hints?
Comments from author:
I'm trying to make Buffy remember her past as slowly as possible, but with a lot of hints of who she was and what she did before losing her memory. And I'm trying to stick to the challenge rules so the "big reveal" will happen during the Cullens' baseball game. -LoL-
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter II: Hello, Anne!" from Skoellya
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awesome chapter :) I like the balance between Edward and Bella's story with Buffy's
Review By [Skoellya] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter II: Hello, Anne!" from Almadynis
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More? Please?
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter II: Hello, Anne!" from Emeraldfire
Review:
More please!!!!! That was great!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Hello, Jane" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
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You don't think that the police might possibly have taken some interest in this such as checking her fingerprints? Since she appears to be the victim of a violent assault and it would presumably be a priority to find out who hurt her and why?
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Who Am I?" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
This is cool I am really liking this so far. I am really looking forward to your next update.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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