Review of chapter "Chapter I: Who Am I?" from
chaoskittyReview:
This is great i am definitely intrigued!
please update soon!
Review By [
chaoskitty] • Date [9 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Who Am I?" from
EmeraldfireReview:
Please continue soon!!!!
Review By [
Emeraldfire] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Who Am I?" from
SlayerandWereLeopardReview:
Excellent start! looking forward to more. Will Bella be at the baseball game as well?
Comments from author:
Thank you. Yeah, Bella will definitely be there. I was actually thinking of a way to not make it look like one of the humans will feel left out coz instead of having an even number of players it's gonna be an odd number. :)
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SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Hello, Jane" from
AerynReview:
interesting start, hope you can continue it soon.
Review By [
Aeryn] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Not Rated