Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from wolframhart
Review:
Just finished re-reading this series. I enjoyed it as much as I did years ago. I hope you return to it someday. I realize with Dawn becoming so powerful it might be difficult. Would the Key want to let Dawn grow old and die or keep her young forever to continue to experience the material world?
Review By [wolframhart] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Now is Dawn Immortal? What about children? Does she want any? Will she have any? And what would they really be? Human? Meta-Human? Mini-keys?
Dawn is a Goddess and a Creator, as the Key she nurtured life. Creators don't like destroying, so Dawn does not like the idea of eliminating the Wraiths. She is running into the problem of Free Will. With Free Will a Being can chose evil, but good and evil are also need for Free Will to exist. There is no Free Will if there is only one thing to chose.
I'll go back sometime and review the other stories in the series too.
Review By [Rune] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
WOW! Inspiring conversation between Dawn & Phillips. Amazing job at understanding and conveying your character's thoughts & feelings. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Really interesting to see Dawn-fully-aware-of-being-the-Key trying to cope with the ethical implications of her choices, in the interests of preserving a diversity of life (including humans, and -- if possible -- some form of Wraith).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Some disturbing echoes of Dr. Manhattan there, hopefully Phillips will help to keep her a little more grounded. Although if she starts to float around naked I'm not necessarily complaining...
Comments from author:
The Watchmen DVD has been sitting at the top of my "to be watched" pile for a while now...
Having finally gotten around to watching "Watchmen"...Dr. Manhatten is a piker, compared to the Key, and I think that Dawn has much better grasp on her humanity than John does.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Found this series a couple of days ago. You are a most excellent writer and have my utmost respect and admiration. The only thing preventing a ten of ten rating has been the shortness of some of the recent chapters. I know this last has been 'vignettes' but it would be nice to see an expanded version of Dawn's help to SGC. I hope its not muse burn-out, cause I've enjoyed your stories way too much for it to be legal.☺ Wes
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]