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Vignettes in the Key of Dawn

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Review of chapter "Long Distance" from Kateydidnt
Review:
Ahh, but can her cell call *through time*? :)
Review By [Kateydidnt] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from Kateydidnt
Review:
you have to wonder, what do the ascended ancients think of dawn? Especially since she is more powerful than them?
Comments from author:
I think that The Others, are keeping their heads down, the way they always have, hoping that she doesn't take too much notice of them.

The Ori, if they ever become aware of her, will be crapping their pants, hoping that she never notices them.
Review By [Kateydidnt] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Poor Wraith. They chose . . . poorly (to quote the old knight from "Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade")!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from (Past Donor)Ponder
Review:
Hmm. Dawn didn't give them any reason to believe she was more than a hologram, no reason to believe she wasn't bluffing. They had no experience to believe the threat was credible.

I suppose this little "lesson" Dawn gave them counts as experience for the rest of the Wraith, as long as the Lanteans manage to communicate exactly what happened there.

*** Ponder
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
I wonder if the Ascended will try to intervene?
More of Rodney being unbearable.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from martelcris
Review:
Now what ? Ori squashing or post Apocalypse party ?
Damn...I was forgetting McKay: he should be very near to explode !
Carter better defuse him or Atlantis can sunk very quickly !!
I can imagine the introduction:
Carter: "Dawn this is doctor McKay Atlantis resident genius."
McKay: "Carter I have no time to meet and greet ! Tell me how you can recharge Zed PM !!!"
Dawn: "Rude much, but tell him, I don't think that shade of red is very healthy.
Carter:"Rodney, this is miss Dawn Summers SGC resident Goddess!"
McKay:"Goddess, what the....You're serious..She charg....Ahhhhhhh"
Sheppard (smiling):"Goddess, in more than one way ! I never had dinner with a real goddess, I know a very good restaurant on Pzx.. "
Review By [martelcris] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraith" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
Dawn giving the Wraith a choice made me think of the Doctor. Before he blows up all those evil aliens, he usually tells them to cease and desist.

Liked this Vignette.

(^_^)/
BEM
Comments from author:
See previous rock.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Now that was bloody cool!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from (Recent Donor)draconin
Review:
A very Doctor Who-like ultimatum! :-)
Comments from author:
Hmm... maybe I should have one lonely god meet another.
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Linguist!" from skychan
Review:
Too short!

okay beyond that, fun and funny, but still Too Short.
Review By [skychan] • Date [16 Jan 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Linguist!" from MercyJones
Review:
Oh! Poor McKay must be going crazy! I kinda feel bad for the guy! (He cracks me up!) LOOVE IT! :)
Review By [MercyJones] • Date [16 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Linguist!" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
Dawn in Atlantis, was bound to have Rodney bouncing off the walls, him wanting to find out how she found out about recharging dead ZPMs.
Sam's having a grand old time watching Rodney's reaction. Dawn intimidated by Rodney - a big no.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [16 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Linguist!" from martelcris
Review:
Good, but the McKay we know will be commanding Sheppard help for a rapid "kidnapping and interrogation" of Dawn, maybe concluded by asking her a date !! The Carter's wrath be damned he MUST KNOW. :)))))
Review By [martelcris] • Date [16 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Linguist!" from MarcusRowland
Review:
That's really sadistic! Poor Rodney...
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [16 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Linguist!" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
lol... your writing of McKay was beautifully done!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [16 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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