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Review of chapter "ZPM" from ReadsaLot
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You know, just to be a geek about the numbers, I tried to figure out just how much power Dawn was channeling here.

So I hopped over to Wikipedia and found the average power output of the Sun and then multplied by a four minute charge period.

TNT equivalent: 21.6 *trillion* gigatons. I thought about trying to figure the wattage of that bunch, but given the the sun's wattage output is a 27-digit number *every second*...


...yeah.

Liking these vignettes. So where do I feed the muse?
Review By [ReadsaLot] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from Traveler
Review:
Reread the entire series when i was notified of this story. I am glad that you have started adding to the series and our enjoyment Until the next chapter, Thank You.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from Bluejello
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I just worked my way through the whole series (so far) this weekend. Wonderful! Great ideas, great characterization, all around awesomeness.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
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Captured by System Lord. Phone rings. Dawn says it's for you. The endless possibilities.
There can be too much of a good thing.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from kbrasel
Review:
Thanks for this. Always a pleasure to read something of yours.
Ken
Review By [kbrasel] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from grd
Review:
Just reread your series and I hope you continue it. I love this series. Thank you.
Review By [grd] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from RevDorothyL
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Great ending (I knew the ever-practical-while-off-world Carter wouldn't just call O'Neill from 15 quintillion miles away to chat)!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from MarkYoung
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I like it. But shouldn't Sam be more, um, circumspect about her location? It's not necessarily a secure line.

Also, what popped into my head:

“A hundred quintillion miles,” said Summers into her phone. “No, it's a real number. ... No, it /is/ a real number. Ask Willow! Look, I have to go. I'll call you back later.” She snapped her phone shut, and looked around. “What?”
Comments from author:
Unfortunately, I goofed in my math. It's only 100 quadrillion miles, not quintillion. I suppose I could try to say it was Sam's mistake, when she did the multiplication in her head, but that's not the sort of mistake she'd make. I guess I'll have to fix it.
Review By [MarkYoung] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
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To be followed closely, of course, by someone's cell ringing in the middle of a fire-fight...

Nice to see more in the series, looking forward to the next.
Comments from author:
That's what the vibrate setting is for.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from (Current Donor)kcl
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Now THAT'S funny. A wicca-special cell phone that works instantaneously over a 15,000 light year distance? Gotta love it!
Review By [(Current Donor)kcl] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from Bugeyedmonster
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That would be very convienent for the military, especially way out in Stargate-land. They always seem to have a communications problem in the show when someone gets in trouble.

Keep writing!
(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Long Distance" from (Past Donor)Ponder
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*snerk* Thanks, glad to see more in this series.

*** Ponder
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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