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Review of chapter "Friends and Lovers" from PrincessTai
Review:
*squeal* I wanted to do you the favor of not reviewing to all of your stories at once (I've read most of them since yesterday, lol) because I have the annoying habit of almost always finding something to say on each chapter, and that would have been HELL on your inbox. But I have to say, thumbs up for the reasoning. I like reasoning. I mean it would be so easy to pick four random people and say go, and MAYBE even make it work, but to take reasoning? That takes good thinking and knowing who you're working with. I wouldn't have thought of adding them, together as a four ... especially Charlie, and it would have always been Marcus before Charlie, because Xander and Faith seem to have a thing for a little dark and/or a little Slytherin-like. But the way you explained it I can see all of them as a set, and even consider how they might work together in two's and three's, not as solid as the set, but say ... I can see Marc and Charlie-boy working it together if Faith and Xand went on Council business. I like that.

Can't wait to see who Xand meddles the girls with, and if Snape can pull his head out his arse THEN his foot out his mouth
:-D
Comments from author:
I have to have reasoning or I can't write it. Even the flimsiest reasoning will do but there has to be a little bit before I start.
And, yeah, it was Marcus before Charlie. That's the point of them being a set. That they can sometimes be in a different permutation, then come together.

I'm just starting to think about how Xander is going to be repaying his best buds. I mean, he worries about them, too, right? ;)~

And review as you like. My inbox can take it. :)
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [25 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreaming of the Future" from Caliadragon
Review:
This was wonderful! I love the reactions of the Wander's to the Council's memorial tower. I look forward to seeing what will happen next.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
It's panic-inducing, knowing that they can die. Knowing that most of the Council just sort of accepts that they're going to die an early death. Glad you liked.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreaming of the Future" from SariLane
Review:
Loved it.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreaming of the Future" from Dreamweaver
Review:
I like it. May have short chapterwork, but okay in my book based on the fact that the material is good. Am wondering if you'll use only the other/supporting HP characters. Meaning you're staying away from the Three Musketeers. Absolutely NO problem with that, just curious. Kinda like the fact you seem to be concentrating attention on the other HP characters, really.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. I'm pretty sure that the Trio will be mostly avoided in this fic. I like them well enough but they aren't really necessary here.
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Connections" from SariLane
Review:
you're getting me hooked to far too many of your stories... I need updates... please!!!
S.
Comments from author:
I'm working on it! Promise!
Review By [SariLane] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Connections" from zafaran
Review:
{snicker} These are delightful. More, more, more, please. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
By Storm has been cooking for awhile, so we'll see how much we get out of that one before I post next. After all, I don't ~usually~ post 26 chapters for one story at the same time. Glad you like it though and we'll definitely see more of it.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Long and Winding Road" from SpacedCadet
Review:
The other Slytherins were being, quite simply, too subversive

"Subversive"??? Was that what you intended to say or did you mean "subtle"?

I am really enjoying this!!!
Comments from author:
*coughs* It's possible that I meant subtle. I get works all mixed up sometimes and they just pop out and I leave them until I can come back with the one that's the right word.

Glad you're liking it, though.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Connections" from Caliadragon
Review:
Wow! You have definitely hooked me in on this one. I really want to know what ASC stands for. I love that you put Xander and Faith in a relationship with Marcus and Charlie. I look forward to the next part.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
*pokes at story* Stop just standing there! People other than me want to know what's happening. And the ACS stands for *mumple murphle* Hey, I was just going to tell a little bit!

Any way, this started out as a smut story. As you can see, it didn't quite turn out that way. So that was the initial reason for hooking Xander and Faith up with Marcus and Charlie. SMEX!
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pride Goeth Before the Fall" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Now... since "Frantic" is usually assoicated with handjobs and no chance of biting, I'm guessing magic was at play for them to have "frantic blow jobs".
Comments from author:
Possibly, possibly. We'll see if I actually go back and change it. I think I might. But we'll see.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Connections" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cute, nice to see Angel and Spike observing the crowd. I wonder what they can smell about the people ;)

Oh, who's Daniel Doyle?
Comments from author:
Angel and Spike got to guest sit both because they were Muscle and because they'd be disconcerting. And, yeah, the senses help, too.

*sighs* Daniel Doyle is my favorite OC. Except, when I started writing Buffy fic and sort of cobbling together Dawn's own set of friends to be her Scoobies, I thought he was sort of canon. I *swear* I heard Doyle say he had a son with his ex-wife named Danny. So, I developed him, only to find out, no, there was no son, only my wishful thinking. SO, now he crops up in just about every story I write. I just can't quit him. Sometimes he's Doyle's son and sometimes he's a brother. Usually, I've explained his existence. I guess I should do that for this story, huh?
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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