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Review of chapter "Letters" from PrincessTai
Review:
Okay, first it was a lot confusing I forged on because it seemed super cool and I was super excited. There were one too many kids-I think the OC's so threw it off a bit for me-but I am a sucker for 'made' families. And when I saw the pairings I just HAD to read. I have a tiny bit of love for Anya/Wes, as in that they are rarely paired and when they are I read. I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Oz/Willow/Tara, and I love how there was a possibly. Usually I don't. But it works for them, and for the circumstaces of the story, idk, but it just fit. Poor Angel is single and Drue died! It's interesting that he's all related to them some how, I do enjoy that too. The Aurelius boys checking up their line. And, guh! Cordy/Xander/Faith. If he's not with Anya, I love him with one of them and with BOTH? It's one of my favorite OT3's! Buffy/Remus/Sirius, it so works .. and I love their kids names. I so do. Only those three, for serious :-D ... Not much of a pun intended. I love that you have Rona. And oh my goodness Bill and Rona!? *squee* Is that why he's around. Rona and Vi were my faves, I mean I loved Molly and Choa-Ann and Caridad so much, but those two are my faves. So it is good to see them around. Kudos, to the OTGeek. Jonathon lives! Yay, Amy has the sass to keep them in check I believe. THANK you, for Gunn and Fred. I know it wasn't for me :-P But thanks none the less, and awwww. Alonna! Final comment on pairings. Are the last three TOGETHER!? Oh wow, even in all my love for bizzare pairings and threesomes, I would have never added Gwen to the army boys. But it sorta fits, especially with Graham as a median, and people remembering that Riley CAN haz personalities.

-- She made sure to give each a hug and to collect the letters so that they wouldn’t get lost (Neville), forgotten (Harry), or destroyed (Connor).
LMAO.

My Buffy has made Sirius grown up. That's the only thing I can think, because knowing Buffy she probably helped Remus in giving Sirius blank stares and telling him his feud with Snape-Although he SHOULD wash his hair-was stupid :-P


So enjoyed this! :-D
Comments from author:
I'm glad you forged on. The OC's only really made sense if you'd read the Prequel. Anya/Wes was a spur of the moment decision and I decided that I liked it. Oz/Willow/Tara. I think they're just in the right place for it to work in this story. Yes, Angel is single. I don't know who to hook him up with. And Dru. Just because she got a soul didn't mean she wasn't going to be crazy, it just meant she was going to feel guilty for the things her demon wanted her to do.

Cordy/Xan/Faith. I'm also of the mind that if he's not with Anya, he should be with one of them. Buffy/Sirius/Remus. Was also a spur of the moment decision. As for their names, Buffy was only going to indulge Sirius's family practice of using astrological names up to a point.

I happen to like Rona because she was a bit of a smart ass and she took no guff from anyone, even when she was just a Potential. As for the OTGeek, I thought Amy needed someone and there were two perfectly weird guys just hanging around. Gunn and Fred, for serious. As for the last three, they weren't until you said it like that. And now, they may just be.

And you know kids. They either lose stuff, forget it, or destroy it. As for Sirius, I like to think that if he hadn't spent all of those years in Azkaban, he'd have learned to let things go.

Glad you like!
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Letters" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Oh, sweet! Can't wait to see how they rock Hogwarts. And yeah, it has to be some kind of half giant magic with Hagrid.
Comments from author:
Hogwarts had better be made of stern stuff because these kids are hellions. Hagrid. I was just always so very fond of Hagrid. It has to be magic.
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Letters" from liability
Review:
I love this series, the idea of a bunch of siblings in the same year is cool, are they going to be in the same houses as canon, or has the time at the hotel changed them?

I can't wait to read how conner handles a broom
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. I don't know about the Houses thing yet. I keep waffling. But regardless, the hotel has changed them. We'll just have to wait to see how much.

Connor. On a broom. Oh, well, there's trouble, right?
Review By [liability] • Date [19 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letters" from SpacedCadet
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Xander Harris: Hyperion Handyman; carpenter; demon hunter; involved with Cordelia Chase and Xander Harris; father to Nico and Sasha; adopted father to Millie and Marcus

Is Xander that self-involved or should that say Cordelia and Faith ?

Looking foreword to more!!!
Comments from author:
I will fix it, I swear.

Glad you like.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letters" from HarmMarie
Review:
I liked this. The lists at the beginning were very helpful in sorting out who everyone is. One thing though, you made a small typo and said Xander was involved with Xander instead of involved with Faith. Just so you know. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I was very, very tired of making lists by the time I got to the adults section of this story, so. I'm just glad Xander's the only one that ended up doing himself. Thanks for telling me, though. I'll fix it on the next update. Which I'm working on.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letters" from Caliadragon
Review:
I am thrlled to see a new part of this wonderful universe and I cannot wait to see the group at Hogwarts and their introduction to Hermione. I hope the beginning of their friends are easier than they were at the beginning.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm pretty happy to be dipping my toes back into this verse. As for Hermione, they've dealt their whole lives with people who are smarty pants. I don't think it's going to be that big a deal.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Letters" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
Yay, sequel!! Or, fic, since the last one was a prequel, whatever. Awesome!
Comments from author:
Yeah, but can you see trying to understand this story without the Prequel? Talk about being lost. Glad you're liking it.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letters" from withaPrefix
Review:
This, along with many other fics written by yourself, is very well written and has a good plot. YAY GOOD PLOT!!!! But um, question? Do you know that chapter one repeats? Chapters 1 + 2 are the same! If you already know, can I ask why? Mais it is still very good! I love Hagrid! He's a sweetie! On a side note, I hope the kids kick some serious ass!!!

:)
Comments from author:
YES! Good Plot! Glad you think so. As for the whole repeating thing, I tried to post the character run down by itself and got quarantined before I could post the second chapter. So. Chapters 1 + 2 were supposed to separate but are now together *shrugs* I didn't do it. There's only one chapter, now, though, so someone must have fixed it. I'm glad you like it! And Hagrid! *sighs* Hagrid, why so awesome? Ass kickage assured! I think. I'm pretty sure.

;)~
Review By [withaPrefix] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letters" from kayron
Review:
I'm glad to see that Harry and the other kids are going into the Wizarding World with knowledge, instead of ignorance. The adults did well to explain to the kids, in a simple way that they would understand, that people would have unreasonable expectations of them and be fickle. Sirius also accepted responsibility for what they might have to endure from Snape. The adults made it clear that all of the kids were loved equally. These kids are going into Hogwarts with a solid foundation. They aren't going to be led around blindly by Dumbledore. I can't wait to see them shake things up! Thank you for a great update.
Comments from author:
That was the majority of the purpose of this story, to see what they'd be like if they went in with some knowledge and a decent foundation. And I think Sirius had to grow a little, hanging out with the Hyperion crew. I'm glad you like and I'll see what comes up.
Review By [kayron] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Letters" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well done continuation. Good fun, thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm having to try to play within canon again so we'll see how it turns out.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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