Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Xander Harris: Bad-Ass Wicca?

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Warlocks Are A Bitch" from eriktheviking
Review:
Even with magic, Xander is still Xander. Great chapter, thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And thanks for reading.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from mikerich
Review:
good story.cant help thinking that if Xander is doing magick for as long as he has ,then who did he go as for Halloween and what influence did that have on his thinking.
Review By [mikerich] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from eriktheviking
Review:
A very novel approach, well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from thales
Review:
Very interesting start!

There are far too few story's where Xander can cast spells or has other magic abilities.

I hope to see more of this soon, keep up the good work!
Review By [thales] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from ChiVayne
Review:
Nice start. I admit that what drew me in was the note on the pairing, I'll be interested to see how you manage that. Is that the last of the Sunnydale crew or is this going to be an additional set of people to protect for Xander?
Comments from author:
Well, as far as Tara goes, I never thought she was just "lesbian." A big part of Buffy was that it was never about gender, it was about the person.

And there will be a lot more Sunnydale. Can't exactly let the mayor turn into a giant snake, now, can I?

Thanks for the review!
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from (Past Donor)damiendumbledore
Review:
I really hope you keep updating this story. Its an interesting take on xanders character.
Comments from author:
Thanks for saying!
Review By [(Past Donor)damiendumbledore] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Cool!
Do more!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from CPTSkip
Review:
Interesting beginning. Nice job with Xander's character and the other Charmed Ones. I hope you write more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from johnbr
Review:
great stuff. Good length, can't wait for more.
I loved how you bypassed the whole Xander
Lying to buffy thing, Peace love and dope!
Review By [johnbr] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
Most impressive. I will be following this.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I'm... I'm honored.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from Kimera
Review:
I like the story so far, and I would like you to continue it. I am curious on how Xander is going to change the Charmed Ones.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Kimera] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from Jryu
Review:
For the love of Pete...

One speaker per paragraph! This is basic grammar! You DO NOT have two different characters speak in the same paragraph.

It just makes the story hard to read. I don't care if the character in question is only 'saying' one letter! If another character has spoken in that paragraph, start a new one!
Comments from author:
It's fixed. Thank you for your honesty.
Review By [Jryu] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from AonGealach
Review:
I love that you had Xander do the curse and that he knows more about Wicca than Willow. I love that he is practicing it correctly by cleansing himself correctly also. The whole being a part of the Halliwell family just adds to the awesomeness. I wonder how the whole charmed one thing is going to work out with Xander there. Will they still need Leo the repairman with Xander there? Will Leo be his whitelighter as well? Will Xander go back to Sunnydale? More writing would be great!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks very much! And don't worry, more is coming. All your questions will be answered.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
start back Page: 11 of 11
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking