Wow, great fic! I've never watched Sentinel (read plenty of fanfics, tho), but I think you've got the characters down pat, I especially liked Teal'c's point of view and his interaction w/Blair. If you ever decide to write a sequel to this, I'm so totally there!
Review By [SnakeofMedusa] • Date [31 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This was so wonderful. The characterizations were great and so was the storyline. I liked how much of the fic was from Teal'c's POV and really enjoyed his interaction with Blair. And Jack and Jim were hilarious too.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I definitely wanted to have a strong, moral character (Teal'c) around to give Jim a good dose of disapproval for his cruelty in canon.
"Ah, but we can. We're the government, and the government pretty much does what it wants," O'Neill said, and that same childlike cheerfulness from earlier was back. Blair made a mental note to tread softly around O'Neill any time he seemed cheerful. He was scary when he was cheerful.
LOL! this fic is amazing. your charcterizations are incredible. And the humor is deadly! I've nearly choked several times now. Seriously, you've captured the voices so well.
At first I didn't think I would like this story, and well I was right I love this! The visuals for this are beyond wonderful. I am eager for more of your wonderful work.
Review By [spring] • Date [7 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
"They so do not like me just because I poked a few holes in their theories and totally enjoyed it." That was worth a giggle. I liked the way you kept all the characters IC. Especially at the last two chapters, you showed everyone as the grownups they are. As always, you have a new and exciting and different way of looking at canon.
