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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from cbq
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Thanks for a great story, I thought the characterisation was very well done. I'm glad someone is still writing Sentinel fiction.
Review By [cbq] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Nyn
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Aw, I love the way you wrapped this up. And there seems to be plenty of room for a sequel -- any chance of that?? :-)

I loved the evolution of the Jim/Blair relationship. You really fixed that quite well. And Teal'c was amazing. I never considered using him as the POV in a story like this where it wasn't obvious that he was a key part -- but you really rocked that. Excellent job! Thank you so much for this story. I loved it!
Review By [Nyn] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from ElfgirlJen
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Great story all around.
Thanks for sharing
Review By [ElfgirlJen] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Lyd
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I love the sentinel and your Blair is nearly perfect. He does give in a little too fast to Jim, but the parallels between Jim/Blair and Jack/Daniel are excellent. I hope this only the first of a series? I can see a series of one shots exploring off world highjinx or aliens in Cascade.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from kaekae
Review:
Good Story
Any hope for a sequel?
Review By [kaekae] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from VillageOrchid
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Simon... ah. Well he isn't entirely happy, but he's got his "best team" back and oddly functional. Thanks for taking the time and sharing the tale. Wasn't expecting the "spirit tracking" factor -- but I guess both Sentinel and Guide are trusting their intuition more now.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MistWalker
Review:
Awwwww it's all done!!
I loved this story! You really worked with the characters and their personalities really well. I loved how even though the story focused in on Jim and Blair that you had a lot of it seen from outside them - T'ealc and Jack especcially. And Simon poor poor Simon you got him spot on there at the end! lol Will be on the look out for other new things from you!

Shade and Sweet Water
MistWalker
Review By [MistWalker] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Past Donor)Kanzaki
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A~aw! *pouts* is over nows....

I enjoyed this story greatly... Dispite the lack of Teal'c POV near the end ^_~!
Review By [(Past Donor)Kanzaki] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Thedruid
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Huh, a good chartization of Jim and Blair actually, and very true to all the charcters in this story. Though are we going to see more of Oma and Anubius in the future?
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Quoshara
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This was great. I always enjoy your Sentinel stories, crossover or not. Your ideas are always fresh.
Review By [Quoshara] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from RevDorothyL
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Love to hear Simon channeling a bit of O'Neill: "Just, whatever you do, find some excuse that at least looks possible on paper . . . . And let me believe that excuse, got it?"

What a fitting conclusion!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty-nine" from (Past Donor)Kanzaki
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Is it dones? So cute, and Yeah, need to figure something out with Anubis and Oma.... I don't think she's evil... Just self-serving self-important and allways thinks she's right/knows best.
Review By [(Past Donor)Kanzaki] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twenty-nine" from RevDorothyL
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Ahhh . . . now THAT's the Jim and Blair we like to see (plus SG1 at their best).

And how useful for the SGC to know something about Anubis (and something about how he might possibly be fought, if need be) way ahead of that revelation in canon! Not to mention, Daniel may be a bit more cautious about Oma's advice, in future.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty-nine" from VillageOrchid
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This was great! I'm looking forward to AU-ey vingettes or stories from both Cascade and Colorado. Daniel's path will be different... Loki might find some other hoktauri to check out... all sorts of things.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty-eight" from RevDorothyL
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Blair standing up to Anubis? Priceless.

Carter's assurance to O'Neill immediately afterwards ("Give me some time, and I'll make up something plausible")? Equally priceless.

Loved the fact that Blair was able to discern that Oma's path wasn't the only one, by the way, and that he had other spirit guides to turn to, including his childhood mentor Roland.

Plus, clarifying the mutual and interdependent areas of responsibility and strength of both Sentinel and Shaman was really . . . nifty!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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