Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
I love this chapter. I only caught one mistake in grammar/spelling so go you! I am very eager to see what you have planed for this so far wonderful fic.
Review By [spring
] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from christytrekkie
Interesting start. Can't wait for more.
Review By [christytrekkie
] • Date [24 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
I think the challenge involving the Power he knew not would make things interesting if the actual ritual was before Harry died and returned.
After all, it's a well known tenet of after Season One that temporary of not, the Call resumes at the death of a Slayer.
With all the female Potential activated, the only other person that could conceivably be Called would be the other possibility for the phrophecy.. Neville Longbottom.
Review By [CrystalBlaze
] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from imokit
Loving the intro, wish there was more
Review By [imokit
] • Date [22 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eewec
This setup could lead down all sorts of different avenues, so for now I'll wait and see what you do with it, though for now I'm intrigued.
Oh and “Willow why do have it say “High levels of testosterone?”? First, use single quotes on something someone is refering to while speaking, such as “Willow, why does it say 'High levels of testosterone'?”. You're also missing an end quote, so I'm not sure if your question mark was in the wrong spot as well and the grammer on that sentence *shivers* 'Why do have it' eep! Yeah I get that they're the scooby gang and all but, well, even they're not that bad.
Review By [Eewec
] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NeilDingley
Good start, looks promising already.
Review By [NeilDingley
] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Not Rated