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A Series of Carnivorous Events

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Review of chapter "Kendra is What..." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
B,B+C+D.

4 girls, 1 boy(albino), fast development until 8-9 and slowing there to match human aging, none of them like clothing unless it's cold outside or it serves a purpose. Blending in with the outsiders is fine, but when just with pack clothes go flying.

Considering Slayer's are not suppose to get pregnant and Xander's DNA should have made crossbreeding impossible, I don't really see everyone jumping on the 'Let's Blame Xander' wagon. Kendra herself told Xander she couldn't get pregnant that night.

Heh, Joyce already assumes Xander is nailing Buffy.
Comments from author:
Slayer's can get pregnant if they want as far as I know like any ordinary woman. They just usually don't live long enough to actually have children, aside from Nikki Wood the only Slayer to have a child in canon. So yeah.

I'm not sure what to say about Xander being incompatible. I for one think he's fully compatible, especially since he is currently a walking fertility drug. I mean he is still human, the physical changes are due to a mystical empowerment and haven't taken away anything of the human reproductive system. So yeah.

Also I don't think Willow or Kendra blamed Xander, only Joyce did. But maybe she'll come around. Joyce also knows Buffy really likes Xander and secretly I think she wants her daughter to get involved with him. So of course she's going to assume the two of them already did it because hey she doesn't know about Faith's presence.

So two people so far want the kids to dislike clothing, heh that could cause so many problems oh yeah. I can't wait to see how the results of the poll come out. Glad you liked this update.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kendra is What..." from TheLaughingMan
Review:
D and B.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hammond & Ludlow" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I wonder if the Nephew will stop investigating after he gets his nose bitten off or if he'll do something stupid like try and separate Lex and Alex.
Comments from author:
Being Lex's uncle Peter Ludlow has no say in the matter and also he really won't be meeting Xander any time soon I think. I suspect he will be facing a few months of fruitless searching before, four years later, and the events of The Lost World Jurassic Park will occur. I'll probably be jumping ahead to that timeframe after I finish off A Pack Hunter Stalks Among Us seeing as how I never wanted to write the daily lives of the Scoobies in Sunnydale with this series.

Still I'm sure my readers will enjoy any future adventures that emerge from my muse. Thank you for the review and hopefully you won't be dissapointed with the second chapter of APHSAU. (Boy even the acronym is long.)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hammond & Ludlow" from CPTSkip
Review:
I really love the way you keep switching from horror to humor to pure adventure in this lovely series of yours. I really look forward to more. For instance, I wonder what Glory would taste like to the Pack? Lol!
Comments from author:
I wouldn't know, the Pack probably won't be able to stomache her anyway. LOL I'm glad you enjoy the series though, the second chapter for A Pack Hunter Stalks Among Us was just sent to my new Beta reader, so hoefully it'll be up by Sunday night. Hope you'll like it.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moments with Lex" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Excellent work!

Loved the way Lex and Willow got along and Willow's ability to babble things she shouldn't on the computer!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moments with Lex" from BurningLight
Review:
Lex and Willow friends... Xander gossip... poor guy!
Review By [BurningLight] • Date [7 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Faith got to Montana" from Morgomir
Review:
Dark but well written. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Faith got to Montana" from ChiVayne
Review:
Did that remark about being someone's snack mean that Faith got eaten by The Pack? Bummer. On the other hand, Faith as a mere Potential may not have been able to cut it as Pack.
And Kakistos didn't seem to be able to easily pass for human, did he? Faith's watcher must have really dropped the ball there.
Still, I'm enjoying the stories.
Comments from author:
Faith isn't gone yet, that was just Crypt Keeper's usual bit of humor for the end. Remember Kakistos was in the middle of rapeing her when he left the warehouse though I never mentioned her specifically by name. Faith still has yet to appear in A Pack Hunter Stalks Among Us, when she does trust me it's going to be something else.

Kakistos was on the other side of a closed door, it wasn't open, so she couldn't see who was on the other side until she actualy unlocked the door and opened it. Maybe I should have mentioned it was locked in the narrative. Oh well.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [6 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Faith got to Montana" from Cutiepie
Review:
Meh, not up to your usual standards. All the previous installments have been quite nice (inasmuch as a dark-ish fic like this one could be considered "nice"), but this one . . . drier than the dust clinging to the Crypt Keeper's rags, I'm afraid.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry you felt that way, I could have made a bookend with Crypty and actually wrote down the scenes he narrated I suppose, but I wasn't too sure how much detail I could get away with, with the rape scenes and stuff that were in my head.

Trust me the second chapter of A Pack Hunter Stalks Among Us is going to deliever some bang up stuff with Faith and Kakistos that I hope will really turn a few heads.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Faith got to Montana" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
*shrug*

Lots of tell but no show.
Comments from author:
Hmmm, maybe so but I was just going for a fun little ficlet that was kind of meant to be all flash and minimal substance. I mean the last chapter I posted for this didn't seem to garner as many reviews as I would have thought, but instead of being all Emo about it I just decided, well have fun with it and see what happens. :D

I guarantee there won't be any more like this chapter. I guess I shouldn't have got the old theme song for Tales from the Crypt stuck in my head, it just wouldn't go away until I wrote the chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Faith got to Montana" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
Very nice!
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Faith got to Montana" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
VERY nice.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Carnal Passions" from ChiVayne
Review:
Kendra is very underused in most fanfiction. Nice chapter.
Comments from author:
I think it's because most writers are more interested in working with Faith then Kendra, so they always stck to canon where she is concerned killing her off at the end of Season Two. Or if they write stories after Season Two she's already dead, no need to worry about her. Personally I liked the thought of keeping her alive for a change to see what differnt dynamics she could make.

But that doesn't mean Faith won't be involved, in fact I've gone and included her too now with a big twist on her character. I'm sure it won't dissapoint. You know with a sex scene in this one I thought there'd be way more reviews. Oh well, thanks for the review and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the series.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Carnal Passions" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Great chapter, but I can't help but think there probably is one or two homeless people in Sunnydale and that brought up thoughts about how tough they must be. Now I have thoughts of a homeless Blade living on the streets of Sunnydale!

Who wants to take bets that the bit she forgot in the book about slayers getting pregnant involved empowerment spells?
Comments from author:
I'm afraid you'd lose that bet, remember Nikkie Wood had a son, Robin Wood who would grow up to be the principal of Sunnydale High in Season Seven. (Among other things.)

Pleased you enjoyed the chapter though, and I'm not sure what to say about Homless in Sunnydale. Maybe there are a few now that the Slayer is living there, but all in all I'd say it'd be far too hazardous to their health to even try to live there.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Naming the Scoobies" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Hmmm, wonder who it was.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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