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A Series of Carnivorous Events

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Review of chapter "Mother's Protect Cubs" from eriktheviking
Review:
Mom rules.
Comments from author:
End of discussion. LOL
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zabuto's End" from eriktheviking
Review:
Even more greatness. The pack is alpha, the pack is omega.
Comments from author:
Heh, heh, too true. Glad you're enjoying these teasers as it were until the longer sequel is done. I'm thinking it'll be finished this week if I keep at it. But who can say.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Losing Giles" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Yeah his behavior would worry the pack, as they wouldn't understand it, but I have to wonder if they'll figure it out over time. Xander'll extend their lifespans by a large margin just by protecting and guiding them, so the question is, how smart do they get over time?
Comments from author:
A lot smarter than you might imagine in a fairly short span of time. Let's just say Divine Intervention is involved and leave it at that. And now I must return to the keyboard for an entirely different matter, my muse is quite insistent today. *Whip Cracks*
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [27 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Losing Giles" from angelkitty
Review:
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa poor giles, now they will have a PISSED OFF raptor on the loss. and if angel does not leave he will die, and if buffy gets in the way i think xan just might kill her too. cant wait to read more
Comments from author:
Yeah, Xander's going to be really upset so upset in fact that Giles' first replacement won't be around for very long I think. :D Hint Hint.
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Losing Giles" from BurningLight
Review:
Still Alpha was Alpha and they would obey Alpha. For now.
Ominous... pack will betray Xander in future? Fight for Alpha status?

Interesting level of intelligence.
Comments from author:
To quote Doctor Grant from JP III...

"Ellie they were smart, they were smarter than Dolphins, they were smarter than Primates."

Pack mentality is that the Alpha remains the Alpha until someone challenges him/her and wins. If that means one of the Juveniles once fully grown will challenge Xander is up for debate. I'm not sure if I'll be writing this story to that length. I have so many other WIP's that need to be finished off so I can't let this overtake me.
Review By [BurningLight] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Losing Giles" from CPTSkip
Review:
What can I say? Great two updates, and I'm glad Kendra didn't die, but you killed Giles! Will Potential Faith and her Watcher show up to take over from Giles or will it be Kendra's Watcher, or Wusley Wesley? Nice job with the raptors, I find I actually like Xander's little bloodthirsty crew. But damn, you killed Giles! More, please?
Comments from author:
Getting Raptor dialogue is a tad difficult I will admit, they may be smart, but their language most likely wouldn't be as diverse as human language simply because they are Predators and Animals. As far as who replaces Giles, canonically it was Wesley so Wesley it shall remain though he will quickly come to realize that things are not as he was led to believe.
Potential Faith and her Watcher may or may not guest star at some point as far as Kendra's Mister Zabuto... I have plans for him.

Predators and their Prey typically don't ignore one another for very long after all and Velociraptors definately count as being top of the food chain. (At least when the Rex ain't around.)

I Killed Giles! I'm a Bastard! LOL Not really, I just felt emotionally in this continuity it would make for a more dynamic development if Giles was killed. And really when Xander thinks about it, in a way it was kind of his fault, by saving Kendra and killing Drusilla he indirectly led Spike to the actions he took. It's going to be angtsy fun when we get to that scene.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Losing Giles" from Crayshack
Review:
I always like fics with someone taking on animal asspects. The aproch you use in this fic is one I have never seen before and I very much like. My only sugestion would be to tryto consolodate future stories into one, longer, story.
Comments from author:
Well the first part of this series was one long fic. I didn't want to go through all of season two and re-write everything to reflect the changes in Xander's personality so I chose to write short disconnected scenes that paint a hint of a larger picture. I did it partially to appease the readers of the first story while I worked on a second longer installment. As such I began posting them all as seperate stories, so far at least as far as I know none of the Moderators have been upset by this posting habit. Still if I write future ficlet length stories I suppose I can add them as new chapters for this one, if it's really bothering people.

I'm glad you've enjoyed these stories though and hope I can live up to expectations with the sequel to Bewitched, Bothered and Bermuda Triangled.
Review By [Crayshack] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Losing Giles" from Cdog
Review:
Aw that's sad about Giles, maybe at least this way Wesley can become a real watcher like in Angel instead of a wimp like season 3. Shame though that Xander and the Raptors couldn't be there for the "fish sticks" in the beginning of the season. At least I think that episode came before Triple B.
Comments from author:
Yes well we can't all win I suppose. Maybe someone else will write a Jurassic Park Xander crossover because of my fic and have Xander being possessed in time to include that particular scenario. Wesley will have huge shoes to fill considering that Giles hasn't just been fired, he's been mudered.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Losing Giles" from LNR
Review:
Can you please combine your stories, and just add chapters. Tracking won't work with separate stories.
Comments from author:
Huh, wow that's the first someone has complained about the way I'm posting these ficlets. I'll consider it for the future I suppose.
Review By [LNR] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Losing Giles" from eriktheviking
Review:
Grief, overwhelming and destructive. Well written.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this installment.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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