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Review of chapter "The Adventures of a Caffeinated Slayer!" from Crydwyn
Review:
Yay another instalment into this great story. This chapter felt a little shorter than the others (but then I did read the first 5 all together so that might be why) but then this chapter was more of a setting the scene for the next plot development so there wasn't too much to expect. I have some vague ideas as to who the unnamed guy was, though I have to say it felt a little out of character for Buffy to not ask his name, especially when she found out that Bruce knew who he was.

Definitely looking forward to your next update, hope you enjoyed your review candy :D
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Adventures of a Caffeinated Slayer!" from HeatherSin
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Eeep! I know this isn't an actual review. It's because I'm waiting to see what happens next...(taptaptap) still waiting. (wink)
Review By [HeatherSin] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Adventures of a Caffeinated Slayer!" from VillageOrchid
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Ah, a ritual looking killing in a store that reminds Buffy of the magic shop. Maybe she should be on the phone too.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Adventures of a Caffeinated Slayer!" from Tjack
Review:
Very nice, things are ramping up well.
Since Bruce didn't come to full alert, the short man with the long nose isn't Dr.Crane. Could his last name be... Cobblepot?
Comments from author:
Aren't you clever? Shhhh! I was being all vague and stuff ;-)
Review By [Tjack] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Adventures of a Caffeinated Slayer!" from Ailisande
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Poor Buffy on her first over-caffeinated date!

So I don't have an espresso maker, but I'm working on bribing my friend into giving me a bunch from his machine so I can experiment with a possible fudgaccino. Medical school requires caffeine...so I figure this is an acceptable use of my time =).
Review By [Ailisande] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from Romanak
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I'm really enjoying the characters in this - including the city of Gotham. One of the things I've always liked about the Batman verse is the fact that there are practical and political issues included as well as the fighting. And now the added bonus of visualising Christian Bale. Mmmm. But moving along... I like the way you're weaving the girls into the Gotham life. What I want to know is (a) of course: who's going to find out what and when, and (b) what costume Buffy will end up choosing. After all, just putting on a mask isn't enough when the city CCTV cameras will also catch the same person without a mask further down the street.
Batman deserves a woman who understands duty and the good fight, as well as the need for a secret identity.
Review By [Romanak] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from katgurl
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I like this a lot. Is Buffy going to figure out that Bruce is Batman by herself or is Bruce going to tell her? I loved Buffy's reaction to how the newspaper described her. Denial is such a lovely thing isn't it? I also like the relationship between the sisters. It's more mature, which shows how much they've grown since the fall of Sunnydale. Please keep up the fantastic work, and I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter!
Review By [katgurl] • Date [6 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from CrystalBlaze
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"Doomed!"

Well, maybe not. Bruce is likely grinning as Alfred laughs his head off reading that story in the paper, mind you.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [6 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from Booster
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Highly amusing, and very well written. Please keep up the excellent work.
Review By [Booster] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from Evie
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What a great chapter! I really love how your shaping this story up.. With Andrew coming to town to live with them, I can totally see him becoming their Alfred-type person. Only way weirder. :)

Can't wait to read more!(so update soon, k?)
Review By [Evie] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from Jezzibel
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Wow! This is a really amazing story. I love the way you write Buffy's reactions to being a 'superhero'. Everything is very spot on.
Review By [Jezzibel] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from anouk
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Wow, this is great! I especially love Batman/Bruce and Buffy interactions. You write everyone very in character and I like your take on Gotham. The city seems to really have some character the way you describe it, not just a generic background. Love the little details, like Buffy's job (very fiting), the coffee place and its owner, the clubs. With very little amount of words you manage to convey really well the feeling of the places and the people. I'm definitely tracking this and hoping for more updates soon. Love how Buffy and Dawn are both somewhat evolved from the way they were in season 7. Time has passed after all and they had time to take in all that happend to them at the end and get on with their lives. I like the way they are here, they could have easily became like this after the show.
P.S. hope you wont bring in too many Scoobies as that would sort of destroy the nice balance between verses that you have here. But having Andrew around should be fun to watch.
Comments from author:
Thank you! And Andrew is the only one I'm planning to bring to Gotham. I think he'll be just about all the gals can handle ;-)
Review By [anouk] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from gothfeary
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I must say... I'm looking forward to seein Buffy put the smack down on th DC villans.
Review By [gothfeary] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from peachy
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This is very good! I was a little concerned about the concept, but you're executing it very well. I can't wait to see more.
Review By [peachy] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from eliseth
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I've just read this story... and I really like it. I was waiting for a good Buffy/Batman x-over and now I've finally got one.
Your latest chapter... let's just say I couldn't stop laughing :)
I totally like the way you write and portray the characters, especially how you did Dawn and Buffy and the relationship between them.
I can't wait for your next update.
Keep up the wonderful work! :)
Review By [eliseth] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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