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Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from VillageOrchid
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This is cute. I hope they were whsipering about the crime fighting.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gainful Employment" from PrincessTai
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>>>And by the way, I wasn’t rescued
Oh, Buffy, how she hates being the damsel. But Damn is she good at being caught in awkward sitches. LOL, I know JUST the smile Bruce sent her lol. I giggle at the bit of said smile being graced on five different mags, of her waiting room. Wouldn't be surprised if she had one of said mags in her desk drawerer :-D
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from MistofRainbows
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I know it's better to write helpful reviews but sorry.. snicker... Andrew... snicker.. cliff plus applied physics plus Andrew equals happy day... keep up the writing please.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from smellymonkey
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ooooo

here's your candy....lol

keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter !!! : )
Review By [smellymonkey] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from alexceasar
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cute very cute.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from jezaeiri
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lol. Well I've been lurking but I have to say this is showing a lot of potential. Good work so far.
Review By [jezaeiri] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New City, Same Luck" from kanikan
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Just keeps getting better and better. So, will Andrew help provide her with "Bat Girl" gizmos? Looking forward to the next part. More Buffy/Bat/Bruce interaction?
Review By [kanikan] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from celebrindal
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I really love this story. I think I've read it three times in the last...oh, 76 hours or so. :) My favorite things are the little ones: how Buffy and Dawn interact especially. That's how real people act. And I love the awkward moments. Awesome.

And "...become a tourist attraction for geologists." Oh yes. You have no idea. Unless you do. A huge giant hole, apparently unrelated to tectonic activity? Although there's certainly crustal extension going on out west, it's not like, giant random hole type stuff. Yes, that'd be quite a puzzle. Glad I'm not dealing with it! :)
Review By [celebrindal] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from Ailisande
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Hmm, you tempt me into trying to concoct one...maybe this will my new procrastination tool on the weekends. Cousin Mary's Fudgaccino.
Comments from author:
Squee! I want one too :-D
Review By [Ailisande] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from Freespirit
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Well done. Please update soon.
Review By [Freespirit] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate carrots::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from TheHeartist
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Brucie boy, ever the detective. I think Bats will figure it out before Buffy does vice versa. But I'm still reckoning that Dawn will figure out who Bruce is before Buffy does, Dawn always seemed more observant than Buffy. Loving the timely updates, and the story overall, keep this up :)
Review By [TheHeartist] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from kanikan
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Enjoying the story immensely, like the character portrayal so far, though I wonder with all the slayers not slayers any more, who's in charge of the Hellmouths out there if Buffy is in Gotham? Anyway, great story, looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [kanikan] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from justapiranha
Review:
I am really liking this story so far. And I am really impressed with your knowlage of cuilanary vocab!! It's a nice change from the common vocab usually used in these fanfics.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm a bit of a foodie and I think it shows through a bit ;-)
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from (Moderator)Ava
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This is definitely a cute read but I think you're giving Buffy too much credit at looking beneath the surface of a person and Bruce not enough at covering up his Batman persona. Buffy doesn't look past the superficial unless she has reason too and Bruce is an excellent actor and while the moments where Buffy notices a ding in his 'armor' are interesting they just don't ring true for either character. Your Dawn is just wonderful though. I like her insight and the casual way she steps on or into a situation.
Comments from author:
I don't think Buffy is bad at noticing somethings up, especially if it isn't someone she's particularly close with. Now, going from vague "something" to what it actually is... maybe not. And I always thought Bruce fubs a lot if you're looking for it. But I'll keep your comments in mind and not have Bruce start waxing poetic about bats or anything ;-)
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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