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Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Whoever Brings the Night" from SassyFrass
Review:
Nice update. I'm interested in how Buffy tracked Ethan.
Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. Now that you mention it, I probably should have done a little more explanation for how she found him; the thoughts were in my head but never came across in the fic, I guess. So, I will be addressing it in the next chapter. Thanks for pointing it out!
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Whoever Brings the Night" from AllenPitt
Review:
It's always nice when old friends meet. I'm sure he'll be happy to see her. Hm, if he's really unhappy with her he might send a msg to the council/Giles about a Buffy sighting...
I'd imagine Dawn really doesn't like her, ie thinks she 'ran off and abandoned Joyce...'. Faith if she's still alive might think the same.
* So--did Angel ever come back, & set up in LA? Might have, with her never hearing about it--. Nice crossover idea, it stands to reason CSI type groups would notice some odd events now and again...
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. I think Ethan and Buffy will be able to settle their disagreements with...forced amicability. At this point, I think Giles and the rest of the gang probably think Buffy's dead; they have resigned themselves to never seeing her again. Angel, well, I just assumed with Buffy being in Sunnydale, the PTB's never brought him back. I didn't plan on bringing any of the core Scoobies back because it's like trying go back to childhood friends. It's kinda awkward and fake. But you've brought up some interesting things for me to think about. Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Whoever Brings the Night" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Holy s**t! Ethan? Gotta say, actually love the idea of her teaming up with him. But I wonder, did he go back and do his 3rd and 4th season antics in Sunnydale? A tiny part of me is wondering what's happening there, but I understand if you don't want to mess with that. Can't wait to see what comes next.
Comments from author:
Ethan was kinda like wtf for me too. He walked into the story without any planning on my part. As for seasons 3 and 4 of Buffy, I don't want to spoil too much but I will say that some of it did happen but not the way it did in canon, obviously. His past will come up and questions will be answered, I promise. What would you think of Ethan becoming a semi-regular character in the series, no this story? Thanks for reviewing and I hope you like the next chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Rise Above This" from winnie
Review:
this is a strange and interesting story. hope that it is finished soon.
Review By [winnie] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Rise Above This" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This chapter was little more difficult to understand because of the temporal and POV shift, but I am enjoying your story overall.
Comments from author:
Okay, first off I want to say, thanks for reviewing (again)! I'm glad you like the story; it's not one I had planned on doing but sometimes you don't get a choice, you know? Anyway, I had a really hard time with this chapter because I had to stay in Sheldon's POV. He doesn't know the things we do about the supernatural and trying to avoid making pitfalls with that was difficult. I also included the dream Buffy had in the previous chapter from his POV and did want to get too repetitious with it. The story is completely planned out and the next chapter is already stewing and waiting to be written. At which point did you want to know if Buffy left her sword somewhere, I didn't know which time you were asking about. Really, thanks for dropping by and reviewing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - The Lost Realist" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Great combo of hard-boiled and supernatural. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue - Waking the Demon" from VillageOrchid
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Meaning she left the weapon behind?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Rise Above This" from Illyriagoddess
Review:
Yet another awesome chapter! Loved the ritual; short, simple, and definitely not sweet lol. I liked the calling of the elements and stuff, it reminded me of that scene in "The Craft".

You know my favorite line; I've been repeating it ever since, lol.

Probably my favorite part still has to be the way you described the city of NY at night. Loved it. Simply loved it.

Best description would be the way you described each member of the team. Loved Danny; the illusionist, waiting to slip a noose around their neck! :)

Can't wait for the next chapter! Probably see some of Buffy, right?
-Illyria
Comments from author:
Yup, Buffy will definitely be back next chapter, as will Don, Mac, and Sheldon. Hopefully, it will be done soon! Thanks for your kind words, and I can't wait to see your Criminal Minds fic!
Review By [Illyriagoddess] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Color Me Once" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Awesome interaction in the demon club!
Comments from author:
Thank you, I was kinda unsure as to how it would come across but it took on a life of its own!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [29 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Color Me Once" from Clandestine
Review:
Great chapter :)
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [29 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - The Lost Realist" from Clandestine
Review:
Great chapter you wrote there ;) Good job!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - The Lost Realist" from sunraye
Review:
I love this story.
Review By [sunraye] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - The Lost Realist" from Illyriagoddess
Review:
again, another magnificent chapter. Really, some funny lines and moments and all-together, a very well rounded chapter. i preferred the short flashbacks instead of a long drawn out conversation where they explain things. and i liked that you did the flashback of don and mac, bc that hadn't really occurred to me (what happened after she left) and it was a nice touch.

My favorite part is the small visualization by Hawkes with the skeleton and the "souls" behind people. and the description he gives of comparing Mac to a king and Buffy to a young queen.

Keep up the good work and cannot wait for the rest!!! I am beyond proud of you!!

-Illyria
Comments from author:
Thanks sweetie. It wouldn't be possible, or half as good, without you there to prod (sometimes painfully) forward. Thanks for letting me use that line of yours in this chapter! I can't wait to see your new fic!
Review By [Illyriagoddess] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - The Lost Realist" from katgurl
Review:
Wah-hooo!! Another chapter up, and it's just as great as the rest. Thank you for another interesting chapter. I liked the flashbacks, it kind of gave us an insight into the characters. I also liked Buffy and Sheldon's first meeting. Please keep up the great work, and I hope to see the next chapter soon!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it; I was kinda insecure about how it turned out. Hopefully, the next chapter will be up within the next week and a half; my muse is a slave driver about this fic! Thanks for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!
Review By [katgurl] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - The Black Parade" from Marcel
Review:
I always prefer long chapters... thanks for this one. The way you built the tension was great :) Definitely looking forward to the next one.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [16 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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