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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alexceasar

Review:

Okay, you completely have me enthralled! I have got to know where this is gonna go! Great job. I can't wait for more.

Review By [alexceasar] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel

Review:

Very interesting premise... never crossed my mind. I'm eagerly looking forward to what you come up with :)

Comments from author:

Thanks for the positive review. I'm going to try to post additional chapters over the next few days.

Review By [Marcel] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Valkyrie

Review:

There are some redundancies in the text, but I like the idea. I'm interested in seeing where you take it.

Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jezaeiri

Review:

As an avid Dune fan for at least half of my life who can quote sections of the first three books from memory I have to say I'm pleased to see someone try their hand at capturing the vastness of Frank Herbert's writing. That said, I hope you continue this and I will be keeping a close eye on it.

I wish you the best of luck though you might not need it. You've begun very well.

Review By [jezaeiri] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated

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