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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from batzulger
So very Willow an ending. Terrific story and I'll be waiting for the next one.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [9 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
I so bloody hope you do a sequel to this story... world hate to see such a great tale come to an end.

Thanks for sharing!!

Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Still reading-still enjoying!

Comments from author:
Still reviewing! Yay!! :D


Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from kayron
That was a great catch by John, because I watched Farscape, and I could practically see ten different schemes starting in Rygel's head to get rid of Willow. HAHA! Good update.
Comments from author:
lol Glad you liked. :D That was the problem with Willow's deal with Rygel. Too many loopholes.
Thanks for reviewing!!
Review By [kayron] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from SpinelessPunster
Personally, I'm hoping for four Willows.

As Jool knows, you can't get enough red hair. Or red enough hair.

Supreme Kudos to you for taking the sequel/series plunge. This early in the series, I see a lot of potential story plots.

The bigeest question I have, and I'm suprised it hasn't been commented on is- How will Zaan's survival (I'm pretty sure she will survive, but I could be wrong) affect the series. If she's not dying, though how will they separate the ships in the dimesional 'starburst' space? Who will throw the lever? Will Willow do it with magic? Can she?

Zaan's disappearance from Moya was a major change for the crew, but then again, so is Wil's appearance. Will be interesting to see.

But not as interesting as Crais the rodent, or better yet--Crais the Female. That would give John an anuerism post haste. From laughter. Even Aeryn Sun might bust a gut at that one.

Excellent homage to my favorite eps, btw, thanks for including them in the character thoughts.

Will Chianna almost dying bring D'argo to a better view on life and love? Family is so complicated.
Comments from author:
FOUR Willow?! Hmmm... *muses* I suppose it IS possible... if difficult to achieve and follow.

lmao At least Willow doesn't shed!

Yay! Extra Kudos!! To be honest, so do I. Plus I'm just having too much fun to stop now! Hence the sequel/series plunge.

PULL the LEVER!!!!! Ahem. Sorry. Flashback.

Good question though; I've been waiting for someone to raise that one. Having already thought about it, I can tell you that the answer is, not hugely. But it will have a huge impact on both Willow and Stark.

lol Crais the female! Oooh... *has a sudden idea* ... I'm not guaranteeing anything but that could make an interesting side effect....

No problem. :) The Look At The Princess trilogy had a profound effect on the characters and it foreshadowed the stand-offs between Crichton and Scorpius in Liars, Guns and Money and Die Me Dichotomy. Also, it's going to be significant in a later plotline that you already asked about *hopes that's not too mysterious*. Consider those thoughts layering. Like an onion. Farscape was good at that. Layering meaning throughout the episodes until it all came together in a desperate plan to save the day at the end of the season.

If anything, his inept (and early) proposal shows that D'Argo is as awkward as ever in the arts of love. And Chiana hasn't said yes yet. Better throw Jothee into the mix as soon as possible. *smiles wickedly*
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [25 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from batzulger
This story shows the simple fact that a frog should never EVER get on the Rosenberg's bad side. I'm sad that this one is ending soon, but if you have others to finish before a sequel with Willow vs. Maldis, so be it...
Comments from author:
Have to say, the Maldis episodes have never been my favourites. That said, I am making a point of rewatching them purely as research for when Maldis does pop his head back up again. But that's a storyline I haven't thought of yet...
Thanks for reviewing! :D
Review By [batzulger] • Date [25 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from AllenPitt
and now they're all pals with each other again. That's what 'scape was all about: everybody being friends with everybody else. Wow, no supper? That's really cruel.
* Is it me, or are you thinking: Willow gets "twinned" along with John later on; one pairs with Zhaan, the other eventually goes back to Tara; that willow gets killed, and then the other willow shows up, having sensed it? Just in time to stop tara from destroying the world. Ok, maybe you weren't. But it's a weird thought.
Meanwhile: the PK's & Scorpious are going to really underestimate Willow at first sight. She'll all meek and mild until she loses her temper
Comments from author:
Despite the frictions and the falling outs, they were a family. :) Considering Rygel just blew a hole in Moya I think no supper is kind of a light punishment. Or not when you consider the number of stomachs the little guy has.
* Close, but no cigar. Wrong pairing for a start. ;) Good thought though! It's certainly one to place in the Unrealised Realities box. I've got about three different scenarios for Terra Firma so far, depending on what happens between now and then and on how events are changed in 1986.
It should be fun to see how badly everyone underestimates Willow and what their reactions are when she reaches her breaking point. :D
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
I felt my heart freeze when you said this was almost done. So bloody freaking happy you are planning a sequel!!

Wonderful chapter and love the twisted/unique Farscape humor you out in your story.

Also like Zhaans reaction to Willow letting the energy back into Moya.

Can't wait for more!!

Comments from author:
The thing is, this was only ever meant to have been a one-off drabble for the FFA. The problem was that I waited so long to write it that once I had, the next two or three chapters spilled out in about two days. I really didn't want to end up with another Epic on my hands but I've really enjoyed writing it. It's probably taken me about a month to agonise over what I'm going to do with it.

I think that one of the reasons I love Farscape so much is that it's humour is very akin to mine.

I was struggling with a non-clumsy way to say that the bright light left everyone but Willow with an afterburn on their retina when I realised that Zhaan would react with a 'happy moment'. From there it was a hop, skip and a jump. :)

More will probably take a while. I'm participating in an intense competition next week and college has started back up again. But I'll see what I can do.

Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [25 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Past Donor)James
True to characterization. Nice addition.


Comments from author:
Thank you very much. *grins*

Next chapter's up... NOW!

Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Great chapter and really like how you did John's feelings about how Willow is a link to his home.

Looking forward to more!!

Comments from author:
Thanks Wispr! You always pick out something that most people miss to compliment! *hugs*

Next chapter's up now!

Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from banner
Hey, if cliffhangers are necessary to keep this delightful story coming, I can deal. I love it.
Comments from author:
It's coming... :) I promise. Just gotta finish this scene. *hugs* Thank you!
Review By [banner] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Mcspender
Guess the frog is in for some uncomfortable time :P.

See ya!
Comments from author:
Ohhh yeah! :D

Thanks for the review!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Mackon
This is truly awesome! Can't believe I missed it up to now. You've got everyone's characters perfectly especially Willow. Shame about sparky but I suppose you could have Peacekeepers invade straight away, it'd be a little too cliche!

Thank you very much for sharing this great story, please update soon.
Comments from author:
Whoo hoo! New reader! *hugs* Welcome to the madness and thanks for reviewing.

Thank you also for your comments about the characterisation. I often agonise over Willow while the Farscape characters seem to tumble onto the screen, usually fighting over who gets to hog the limelight.

Sorry about the lack of updates but Real Life's a tralk! As soon as I've finished the scene I'm working on, I'll post the next chapter. :)
Review By [Mackon] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from RevDorothyL
Comments from author:
You like? :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from AllenPitt
Doesn't look good for Rygel. Nobody understands that he had to do it! That willow is a menace! ... but I'm sure everyone will be pals soon. Real soon!....
* Have to admit, I'm hoping that you go for "two Willows" as well as "two Creighton's" in that upcoming episode. Heh....
Maybe Stark can show up soon, to bring a needed voice of reason to the cast?
Comments from author:
Poor Rygel. He's so misunderstood.
* Was toying with the idea. And when I say toying, I mean almost decided upon. Great minds...
Stark's gonna LOVE Willow. Especially if she bonds with Zhaan. Can ya feel the jealousy?
Thanks for reviewing! :D
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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