Okay, the SG and BtVS universes don't exactly mesh seamlessly and I can handle some friction on that level or I wouldn't belong to a site like TtH. That said, in this chapter you have said that Natalie joined the Army (more than once) but called her a Marine. Is she Army or Marine Corps? Using them interchangeably is *really* jarring to a military brat like me, completely bursts my bubble of suspended disbelief.
Review of chapter "Glowy Things And Dawn Don't Mix" from borgrabbit
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Ten is cumulative for the story. I like it pretty much and would like to see more.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glowy Things And Dawn Don't Mix" from RevDorothyL
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6 new or almost-new Aurora-class ships, only previously used by a little old Lantean lady who flew them to church on Sunday? Such a deal!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glowy Things And Dawn Don't Mix" from slmncpm
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oooohh LOVELY! i am glad to see an update!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Translator Wanted" from burmafrdnow
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Only Nit I pick is that Dawn does not seem to really understand the whole reason Buffy is so protective: Dawn is the only child Buffy will ever have, no matter how it happened.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take a Ride With Me" from daydreamer
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I really like this story :) I was slightly confused at first with who Dawn would end up with but now it's becoming more clear.
Review By [daydreamer] • Date [10 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take a Ride With Me" from slmncpm
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oops.. i think they found it already. oh dear. *hands you scones* hurry please?
Nice bit with Rodney commenting on Sheppard's penchant for attracting Ancient/Ascended women!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Do you believe in aliens?" from velara
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Just found this.. only one nitpick at this point in the story..
Teal'c shouldn't have a prim'ta anymore. So the whole snake in the belly thing? Doesn't work. He's on Tretonin by the time Atlantis is introduced, I believe. Though yes, he may feel off due to being Jaffa and not fully human.
