Review of chapter "A Beautiful Friendship" from Beth
Review:
I'm loving this greatly and I like the path it's walking on. However, and please don't take this as something I must have, I'd love to see Dawn with Ronon even though I do like the game she's playing with Faith that revolves around John. Lol...anyway...I'm loving this fic. Keep up the good work when writing it.
Review By [Beth] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Beautiful Friendship" from slmncpm
Review:
heh. lovely. more please!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Headaches and the Sparring Room" from Hermionetobe
Review:
I am so glad I waited to catch up with this. I absolutely love it. I want more, please.
Comments from author:
thank you so much. That means alot coming from you. I love your Key to Pegasus series. There will definetly be more now that real life isnt getting in the way so much.
Thank you for the review!
Review By [Hermionetobe] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Headaches and the Sparring Room" from Bobboky
Review:
nice, next time they should use a pier... or see if Atlantis has a big open room. I mean it is huge, it should have one even if not in the main tower. Maybe a room or field the size of a football field.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Headaches and the Sparring Room" from Odin
Review:
Love the story! So is Dawn going to go for Ronan, John, or Lorne? Or perhaps McKay? Can't wait to find out.
Review By [Odin] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Headaches and the Sparring Room" from Kremer
Review:
So Dawnie did the deed. Nice. Looks like she may need to train with the other two for her new strength & senses, though.
Do they have the gene strong enough for the city and other Ancient things to respond to them more now?
Review By [Kremer] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
WOW! Beautiful scene at the end. Love the depth you added to Faith's background. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you I wanted Faith to have a background, I wanted something more than just a drunked mother that made her like like she was. She lost someone and she never really dealt with it until she told Faith, she just blocked it out. Thank you for the review!
Review By [spk] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heart to Hearts" from neverwill
Review:
Mmmm, I wonder if the robber was just a robber or if it was a Council operative weakening the family bonds in order to easier claim 2 potentials?
Review By [neverwill] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
