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Review of chapter "Heart to Hearts" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent, most excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heart to Hearts" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
Review:
sniff so sad!!!!
Wonderful updates
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heart to Hearts" from slmncpm
Review:
awwwww you make me all teary eyed! bad person.. bad! now hurry and write!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heart to Hearts" from AllenPitt
Review:
Good story! Nice item about slayers getting stronger the longer they're slayers, it fits with what the tv did. (I've read Joss wanted to make Dawn a slayer, but the network nixed that plotline- that's why she's getting all trained in S7 then bam! Amanda is the potential, not her)--
Anyway--- I'd think Carter would rally quickly and decide there is no magic, just physics she doesn't understand yet --Clarke's Law: (any sufficiently advanced tech is indistinguishable from magic). Look at what the Furlings can do etc. the Ancients and Ascension. Anyway, I think that's the rationalization she might come up with.
Hm...pulling rank to force the 3 in... there'll be resentment at first, until people see what they can do, and of course what Dawn can do translation wise. And, one can always hope that her Key-
ness will come into play somehow. Maybe there's info on the Key in the Atlantis database? In her place, knowing she's been around for ages, I could see her typing in a query just to see if there's anything there about her...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Phone's Really Red?" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Fun idea, though badly in need of proof-reading. I'm looking forward to Dawn finally getting to Atlantis.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Phone's Really Red?" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
Review:
Ok, that's just neat.

The title and your last line match.
You totally read the writers manual section on bringing a story full circle.

Keep writing,

Dianasis
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [18 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Phone's Really Red?" from AllenPitt
Review:
So.... will you be bringing in Faith/Natalie's dad at some point? Maybe he's in the military? Just a thought...
Can't wait to see what Weir/Teyla/Ronon & company make of this trio....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Phone's Really Red?" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Phone's Really Red?" from slmncpm
Review:
omg it cracks me up that in EVERY FIC they always say.. the phone is really red??? oh this is priceless! thank you!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Phone's Really Red?" from FireWolfe
Review:
A wonderful chapter. I like this story a lot. It has potential to be great. I was never a great Dawn fan but this fic makes her seem human. I love the way you have Faith in this fic. It is good to see she had family and that it was circumstance not true evil that lead to her mistakes. It would be nice to see her grow into what she should have been had her life not been so dark early on. She is a smart woman and deserves a chance to shine as much as the others if not more. I love Buffy and I like the way she is here. Protective but not unreasonable. I would love to think she and Faith become friends. Yet you have writen this in a realistic and honest way. Nicely done and I look forward to seeing more updates when you can.

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "She has a what?" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Cool! I like this story!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "She has a what?" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Great story so far.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "She has a what?" from manic
Review:
Thanks so much for the update. I'm enjoying the fic. Just one thing really bothered me. Natalie would not be a Major, maybe, maybe a Captain, but not a Major. If I have her age right, at 24.
Review By [manic] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "She has a what?" from PATM
Review:
Loved it! A forward going story that's got the adventurous spirit. The higher secrets clearance for the slayers than the sgc
eased the story a lot.
Review By [PATM] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "She has a what?" from mousemt
Review:
This story's fun, thank you for posting. One small point, no Marine I've ever met would say they'd joined the Army the way Natalie did. They are Marines, and proud members of the armed forces. :o) I know it's small, but it stuck out in my head.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
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