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Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from DarthPayne
Review:
Aww, c'mon it was just getting good.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from cptquinn
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This really needs to be updated. Its too good to just leave hanging like this.
Review By [cptquinn] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from AzrielSunHawk
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oh hell! this is a great fic!! any chance your going to continue it? Cheers!
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from MarcusSLazarus
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Not exactly wild about your harsh treatment of Angel- he was always my favourite character and Anara just seems to be insulting him for no real reason-, and I'm REALLY ambiguous about this latest twist with Loki having used Willow as an experiment- it's stretching credulity a BIT, when you get down to it-, but the central idea is interesting, and the implications of that prophecy Anise discovered should DEFINITELY be intriguing to witness in depth...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from Genuka
Review:
Please update this! This is so awsome!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [8 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from smolder
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I am really enjoying this. And the ending honestly made me feel kinda bad for Buffy which doesn't happen often. Can't wait for the next installment. :)
Review By [smolder] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from DarkFaerieYumi
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YAY! I loved this fic when I read it on FF.Net...at least I think it was on FF.Net. I forget. But YAY! I'm so happy for the update! I hope the next chapter comes soon!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from shawnie
Review:
Overall, I really like this fic. But there is something that is bothering me. I think it is a bit too coincidental that Willow ends up being a host to Anara after being experimented on by Loki as a child. Couldn't she just have been born with the Ancient gene?

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Review By [shawnie] • Date [11 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from GundumM
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i love it and hope that you will update it soon
Review By [GundumM] • Date [10 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from draconis
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I've really been enjoying this story. The start of this chapter seemed to jump around a bit too much and things seemed a bit too convenient (explanations too easily provided/discovered and people too accepting), but overall still a good chapter.

Really hope the prophecy doesn't mean Freya dies/gets vamped and Anise eventually gets stuck in Harmony Kendall. Even if it's temporary that fate is just too cruel...even for Anise! And as does Jack, I like Freya.
Review By [draconis] • Date [1 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
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I agree with what Wise and Thedruid say. The story started off very well but it's now deteriorating in direct proportion to the extra powers and knowledge you are giving to Willow/Anara.

I like the development with Freya/Anise, however; it would be particularly interesting if Freya was turned and Anise remained alive within the undead body, still conscious but no longer able to control Vampire Freya.
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from nemogbr
Review:
Getting better in some parts, but agree with others regarding making Willow too powerful.

Willow in a symbiotic relationship with a Tokra and also a repository for an Ancient database?
Hope you slow it down after Thor gives her the laboratory.

As for the rest.

Hope Xander gets to keep his Soldier/Hyena abilities.
Will Buffy be capable of speaking Latin, French and German?

The Technomancy origins of the Slayer would make it easier to activate all the Slayers. They should be useful against the Wraith.

Hope you update again soon.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from Thedruid
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Ugh. Sorry, this started out great, but with this chapter....

First, your starting to make Willow and Amara into a Mary Sue. She has no real opponents or substantial foil for her.

Second, your rushing the plot, skipping drama and charcter developments. It's becoming just a series of events with only minmial connections between them.

Basically, this is a great idea. But your rushing things now. Slow down on the power-ups, have this be slowly discovered and allow the charcter interaction happen. Maybe even write more than one story in this series as Willow become more involved in the Stargate plots, where these power-ups can be finally discovered more in a more realstic way.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Judge Ye Not Lest Ye Be Judged, Part One" from Wise
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Giving Willow a Tok'ra symbiote, well and good. Making her genetically an Ancient? Ok... now she has an Ancient Repository in her head? ... er...

This is seeming less and less like a story and more and more like you being Santa Claus with the absurd power-ups for Willow Rosenberg.
Review By [Wise] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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