Overall, I really like this fic. But there is something that is bothering me. I think it is a bit too coincidental that Willow ends up being a host to Anara after being experimented on by Loki as a child. Couldn't she just have been born with the Ancient gene?

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

i love it and hope that you will update it soon

I've really been enjoying this story. The start of this chapter seemed to jump around a bit too much and things seemed a bit too convenient (explanations too easily provided/discovered and people too accepting), but overall still a good chapter.

Really hope the prophecy doesn't mean Freya dies/gets vamped and Anise eventually gets stuck in Harmony Kendall. Even if it's temporary that fate is just too cruel...even for Anise! And as does Jack, I like Freya.

I agree with what Wise and Thedruid say. The story started off very well but it's now deteriorating in direct proportion to the extra powers and knowledge you are giving to Willow/Anara.

I like the development with Freya/Anise, however; it would be particularly interesting if Freya was turned and Anise remained alive within the undead body, still conscious but no longer able to control Vampire Freya.

excellent

Getting better in some parts, but agree with others regarding making Willow too powerful.

Willow in a symbiotic relationship with a Tokra and also a repository for an Ancient database?
Hope you slow it down after Thor gives her the laboratory.

As for the rest.

Hope Xander gets to keep his Soldier/Hyena abilities.
Will Buffy be capable of speaking Latin, French and German?

The Technomancy origins of the Slayer would make it easier to activate all the Slayers. They should be useful against the Wraith.

Hope you update again soon.

Ugh. Sorry, this started out great, but with this chapter....

First, your starting to make Willow and Amara into a Mary Sue. She has no real opponents or substantial foil for her.

Second, your rushing the plot, skipping drama and charcter developments. It's becoming just a series of events with only minmial connections between them.

Basically, this is a great idea. But your rushing things now. Slow down on the power-ups, have this be slowly discovered and allow the charcter interaction happen. Maybe even write more than one story in this series as Willow become more involved in the Stargate plots, where these power-ups can be finally discovered more in a more realstic way.

Giving Willow a Tok'ra symbiote, well and good. Making her genetically an Ancient? Ok... now she has an Ancient Repository in her head? ... er...

This is seeming less and less like a story and more and more like you being Santa Claus with the absurd power-ups for Willow Rosenberg.

Lol! Great last line and I am really enjoying your story. But what happened to Anise? Did she escape when her host was turned? And did she really bond with Harmony? Hey! It is your prophecy. I'm just the questioner. Lol! I look forward to more of your delightful story.

Nice update! I can't wait to read more!

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I could not put it any better myself.

Willow should've taken that arm with her to the lab.
The vampires would NEVER find it.

But the arm was kind of gone already by the time she got back.

Good work on the new chapter, I'm hoping thart you'll update soon.

WOW Willow as a tok'ra.. did not see that coming. I look forward to more.

Actually, Anara might take offense at being called a tok'ra. She was betrayed by one of them to Ra after all.

excellent... best sg1 cross I've read in a long while