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Review of chapter "part 4" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Heh, good choice about integrating Ally into Mini-Jack's life. Too bad they dropped both of them from the show, eh?
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 4" from magik
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The poor girl...she has no idea, does she? It's Highschool...which = Hell! I'm liking this story, keep up the great work!
Review By [magik] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 4" from winnie
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Good story and looking for more soon. Thank you for your work.
Review By [winnie] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 4" from VillageOrchid
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Glad to see more of the story. And perhaps some of the vampires there aren't going for the kill, just the feed.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 4" from spring
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Yep keep trying to kid yourself Willow. More soon of this wonderful fic please.
Review By [spring] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 4" from AllenPitt
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I hope she doesn't bring the stake to school --weapons in school, a big no-no these days (Snyder missed a huge opportunity to keep B. expelled after waving a sword at him at end of S2--nowadays she could go to jail for that). Or "I'm building a little fence!"
hm, either word of the Initiative has spread, OR there's a master vamp enforcing discipline... heh, if the kids reported "glowing eyes" then a Foothold situation might be declared. And they kids are likely to remember Willow's face, too.
It'll be weird for her being in a town where the police & civilians are not in total denial. (I've always figured maybe the mayor had an 'inattention spell' in place to make that happen.)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 3" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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nice lead-in hope Mini-Jack and Willow meet soon. and is Ally the new Slayer? If Mini-Jack learns Willows a de-aged twenty-something woman he could finally get some loving. he always feels like a cradle-robbing pervert in all the fan-fics I read about him. once again great story keep up the good work
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 3" from spring
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Wonderful chapter. Thanks for quickly answering that one question sorta about Willow's nerdyness so quickly (post another chapter as I read one why you sneaky author you.) I love this fic so far and and I am very eager for more.
Review By [spring] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from spring
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Oh this is wonderful so far. I am very eager to see if Willow is going to revert to being painfully shy or if she is going to retain her confidence. Also how did Willow know where exactly she was going? More soon please.
Review By [spring] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 3" from Waverly
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Very intriguing! Please update again soon!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 3" from VillageOrchid
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Cool chapter... curious about the "wooden crates" though, when Willow couldn't find any wood. Also "Aly" saw Willow being dragged into the Alley, while the POV you presented from Willow appeared to be that she and the vampire didn't get more than a few feet away from each other.. and there wasn't an alley... unless this is meant to be a second event on Willow's walk home??? Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from VillageOrchid
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Good laying down of the AU rules and nice characterization.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 3" from AriaDragoncrest
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Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 3" from AllenPitt
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Even with solid ID papers etc....isn't someone going to notice Willow is living alone with o adult in the house? She can only con the school with "she's at work, out of town...etc" excuses for why her mom never shows up for parent-teacher conferences and the like.
And if W. gets in any trouble, the "well, call your parents to come pick you up..." thing won't work.
Nice intro on the new girl (from the tv show)--thought you were going to have Cassandra in instead, but the ages aren't quite right for that. Now Willow can make sure she has holy water in her squirt gun ... Jack & Willow should each notice there's something off about the other, in the same way they're "off".... the funny thing is, Willow could tell Jack she used to be an adult, but "woke up this way one morning" and he'd think Thor did it.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 3" from Dreamweaver
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Well, Ally, you can still play with your water guns y'know. You just need a different kind of ammo. Since you're being intro'd into the story, I'm assuming that Willow'd show you where to get it later.

As as for Willow, I don't know if she or anyone else'd thought to have Wills try her stuff or not yet, but I'm wondering if she's tried her magic out or not just to see if the changes or the PTB affected it.
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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