I remember that episode of Stargate. That was when Teal'c was going to metamorphasize into something, and he was hiding out in some warehouse. He made friends with the girl. Who is now friends with miniJack. She's (Ally) already spotted (sort of) Willow in action. Hey...I gues Willow will be the center of her own little Scooby gang! Cool! If Willow does make friends with Ally, maybe she'll invite Ally and her mom to stay in her house.

lovely inclusion of ally - Very interesting so far

I don't like how people way over use TPTB for new plots it would have been better if you had Willow make a Latin mistake like "make me look 16 years old" but the wording actually meant "make a 16 year old looking me" just like Jack.

Well, I was a bit doubtful when I read the outline but I think this story is looking very good indeed.

I'm now deeply curious about what is going to happen next ....

Being de-aged to fifteen isn't so big a deal- if she wanted to, Willow could still pass for an adult who just happens to look fifteen- there are plenty of twenty-somethings out there who do, and she has documents swearing she's older. So once the Colorado Springs thing was over, it doesn't seem like she'd have trouble resuming her old life...

Excellent beginning`

I dunno. The PTB and the Ancients both seem to ignore free will most of the time. They give you a choice where your only option is really to do what they want. You could always say no, but you're pretty much screwed if they do.

this is shaping up nicely.

of course, 'permanent' might be literal. Maybe she'll be 15 forever? erk. I hope she used her skills to put together an airtight background, 'cause if she starts hanging out with mini-Jack, the Air Force will do a background check...
and, while she's physically 15, she' emotionally a lot older. High school won't be as miserable as the first time--she's more mature & self confident

Cute! Can't wait for their first meeting! Super/smart/witch/nerd and mimi/cynical/snake fighting/Jack...and in highschool, no less! Should be fun.

good start, but hope to see more very soon.

I like so far! Cant wait to see what happens next.

So, PTB = Higher beings capable of completely ignoring Free Will and basically can do anything they want to anyone? I don't buy it, you just put them far Higher than the Ascended ancients, otherwise they would interfere and stop them while at the same time making them similar to the Ori in this regard. Somehow this left a bad aftertaste. I mean i like a good Willow/Jack pairing, hell i'm looking forward to it very much. Still got a bad aftertaste though.

Hmm wonder what happens next? Bright white light and suddenly mini!Jack is turned female to fit Willow's preference?

This could be much fun! Please continue.

Ohhhh I love this idea for a story.... Willow and Jack both have their adult minds, but in a 15 year old body, so cool.
I adore Willow/Jack stories, can't wait to read what happens next.:)

More, more, more, please. Poor Willow. I hope they've done nothing to her body in the de-aging that will do hinky things with her magic. And Lord love a duck, there's the issue of emancipation versus needing a guardian to deal with, too. This is going to be such a mess to straighten out. Having Mini-Jack in on this *is* going to be helpful since they can both help each other deal with the issues the de-aging raises, but where Mini-jack is a separate body, Willow is the same person and it's *so* going to screw up access to her own accounts and stuff (I hope she can cook up an illusion for going to the bank and stuff). I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm