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Review of chapter "Part 1" from spk
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Definitely an intriguing story idea and an interesting start. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [20 Feb 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from CadenceCascade
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De aging Willow so she can be matched up with a de-aged Jack without him feeling too much like a dirty old man. (emphasis on the too much...)

I like.
Review By [CadenceCascade] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from magik
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Looks interesting...I look forward to reading more.
Review By [magik] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Ramenth
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Interesting story. You've got a few typos, but I look forward to seeing more.

One other thing. Interesting pairing, but, uh... Isn't willow Gay?
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from littleoldme
Review:
Fun idea! A de-aged Willow and MiniJack adventure is a neat twist on the "someone paired with MiniJack" trope- I don't think I've ever seen him with Willow, and they should be an interesting contrast. Plus, I like the idea of Willow getting to do high school again, now that she has more confidence and is less likely to be traumatized by catty little teenagers who don't know she used to be an adult.

One typo you really need to fix- should be "whether or not" instead of "weather or not."
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Ishikawa
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Interesting start, i like minijack stories and i love willow, some borderline black eyed reaction on her part would have been creepy/nice but hey can't have everything.

Can't wait to see more.
Review By [Ishikawa] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
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I can't imagine any reason good enough to persuade Willow to cooperate with the Powers That Be after something like that. Apart from anything else, they've just ruined her sex life.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from AllenPitt
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at least she'll know how mini-Jack feels. (always thought it was a bit creepy, them dropping him off at a high school with the idea he'd be dating teen girls etc). Also creepy how they just dumped him there and never referred to him again. No wonder there are a lot of "Jack is ticked off at being abandoned" stories.
Hm. So she, like him, won't have parents, just an absent 'guardian' /with paperwork?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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