Fun idea! A de-aged Willow and MiniJack adventure is a neat twist on the "someone paired with MiniJack" trope- I don't think I've ever seen him with Willow, and they should be an interesting contrast. Plus, I like the idea of Willow getting to do high school again, now that she has more confidence and is less likely to be traumatized by catty little teenagers who don't know she used to be an adult.
One typo you really need to fix- should be "whether or not" instead of "weather or not."
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Interesting start, i like minijack stories and i love willow, some borderline black eyed reaction on her part would have been creepy/nice but hey can't have everything.
Can't wait to see more.
Review By [Ishikawa] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
I can't imagine any reason good enough to persuade Willow to cooperate with the Powers That Be after something like that. Apart from anything else, they've just ruined her sex life.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
at least she'll know how mini-Jack feels. (always thought it was a bit creepy, them dropping him off at a high school with the idea he'd be dating teen girls etc). Also creepy how they just dumped him there and never referred to him again. No wonder there are a lot of "Jack is ticked off at being abandoned" stories. Hm. So she, like him, won't have parents, just an absent 'guardian' /with paperwork?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated