Very, very cool -- particularly with the prophetic cave drawings depicting a Slayer-type hero leading a slave exodus to give JT some comfort in his lowest moments.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
I am just *stunned* that he hasn't gone completely bonkers yet! Seriously, people have gone crazy in isolation in only months and he's been alone for 10 years? Okay, maybe not completely alone, but still...You know, it's probably a good thing it's JT and not Jack down there. I'm sorta guessing that Jack would have died by now - somehow.
Comments from author:
He may not be completely bonkers but he's on his way. As for Jack, well I think that he probably would have gotten himself killed within the first month.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Its pretty good. way way way too short though. Your entire story so far doesn't add up to a single chapter yet.
Comments from author:
Almost all chapters of this tale will be very short, more like postcards than real chapters. The good news is that means we will be able to advance much more quickly to the point where JT meets Buffy.
Review By [enderverse] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Not Rated