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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from winnie
Review:
What a story. I can see them asking Sirius and Remus to move into the commune. Big happy famly. Looking forward to see how this turns out.
Comments from author:
*evil grin* I started with my evil grin because I was going to be all mysterious and leading, but I can't manage to do that without actually giving something away, so in the end I've decided to simply thank you for reading and reviewing and not try to drop clues to what's coming.
Review By [winnie] • Date [26 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from kayron
Review:
Good for Sirius!! Even confused and halfway trusting of Dumbledore, he was still protective of Harry enough to face the so-called kidnappers. Luckily for the Scooby Gang, he is now on their side, and Dumbledore's manipulations get cut off again. Now...how did GILES get to be the new Leader of the Light?! And when does everybody, after Giles of course, get to find out? Good update.
Comments from author:
*grins* I freely admit that I'm not the greatest Sirius fan in the world, but I did feel that this is the way Sirius would act/react.

As for Giles and his "new" position, basically it is part of the consequences for the gang being allowed this time together.

On the finding out front, to be honest I'm not sure how that will go, except to say that Giles will find out off screen, but the rest will be slightly more public.
Review By [kayron] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice addition. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Jorrie
Review:
OMG! I haven't read Consequences in FOREVER! It's because TTH doesn't have a tracking thingy for series! Otherwise I'd totally be on the ball! Like usually, I love your ficcie. I love that you've decided that Buffy and co. will be raising Harry, I wonder what he'll turn out like under their tutelage. I also like how you're making them friends with the Malfoy family. I'd love to see their meeting with Snape! I'm still a little iffy on how I feel about the entire Buffy cast is in this one, but it's not a terrible feeling. So no worries on that front. Hope to see more from you soon! This fic is on my radar! Ta~!
Comments from author:
I know, I wish TtH would come up with a way to allow the tracking of a specific series rather than just having to track the author to keep up, because there are some series' that I'd like to track myself.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story now that you've found it again, and I'm glad you aren't feeling totally terrible about the entire Buffy cast being here. However, if it makes you feel (even) better this is the only part where this cast will appear, though we will see some of them appear again later along with some other BuffyVerse characters that aren't in this part.
(But I did feel it was necessary, at least for Buffy and Xander, to see everyone at least one more time.)

As for Harry, I'm not sure how he'll turn out, at the moment I'm more toward a Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff (yes, Hufflepuff) Harry, though to be fair I haven't ruled out Slytherin or even Gryffindor.
(My personal feeling is that the Buffy characters would be spread out into all the houses, so that means that Harry won't be biased against (or for) any house this time around.)
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [29 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Ellia
Review:
Loved the way you worked the awkward conversation, Buffy being all worried about not being worried. And Spike just wanting them both to get on with things. I liked the idea of them being around for so long that it doesn't matter if they play with others from time to time, what the three of them have is always going to be stronger.

Also i adore your Anya, the way she's trying to figure things out, and how she sees the world just a little off compared to everyone else, but invariably she's right about what she thinks.

Looking forward to more soon
Comments from author:
That awkward conversation was fun but also a little bit harder than I was expecting, but in the end it worked exactly like I wanted it to.

I'm glad you like Anya here, I wondered if people would because I admit that I don't play with her much because I actually loathe the Xander/Anya pairing - don't get me wrong I like Xander and I like Anya I just didn't/don't like them paired together, so many times I simply end up leaving Anya out of the fanfic, but I decided she had to be in this fanfic.

*evil grin* I'm working on the next chapter, and having fun, more fun than expected since the next chapter has Dumbledore making another attempt at getting Harry back, which usually has me having to be careful (details/details), but the next chapter (so far) is just plain fun.
Review By [Ellia] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, continueation is always of the good. Thanks for contiueing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
*grins* Glad you're happy.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from kayron
Review:
I get a kick out of Anya. Here she is in a brand new universe, and she's already plotting about how to make money. *GRIN*
Comments from author:
*smiles* Yes, I thought that was so perfectly Anya that I couldn't resist doing it, even though it wasn't in the original plan.
Review By [kayron] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from deathgeonous
Review:
Please forgive more coarseness here, but you're not just screwing with cannon here, you're making it take it up the ass hardcore! Good job my dear author, goo, good job. I hate the Harry Potter cannon, and I only read the first five books, since all I knew of it led me to believe I'd dislike it, because my mom and sister bribed me to. Some HP fan fics however, I do like however, especially when they screw with cannon, and better yet when it's to this degree. And allying with the Malfroy's, in the words of the British, Bloody Brilliant! Thank you so much for writing this serious, I hope to see more on it very soon, good bye for now.
Comments from author:
Don't worry about it, I'm not a fragile flower who hears a bad word and comes down the vapors. ;)

As for HP canon, I may have not loved the first four books, but I did like them, and for me books five and six had their good points (I actually liked six better than five overall), but somewhere around chapter five Book Seven broke me.

Of course, totally screwing with Potter canon wasn't originally my intention with this fanfic, but as I started working I started having these ideas, and decided to throw everything up in the air and see how it went.

Anyway, I am working on the next chapter of this fanfic, but it is going a bit slow because I'm having trouble deciding what details need to be the chapter and what details need to be held back until later. Still I am hoping I'll have a mind hurricane and be able to work everything out soon.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Ellia
Review:
Really well done, you managed to settle the custody issue in a believable way. I loved Narcissa's assessment of the trio, and her thoughts on the events. It's always nice to have a different perspective, and the idea of the Malfoys seducing your three was a wonderful surprise. Very hot, and i liked the way you wrote Buffy just easing into the idea of being with a woman. I'm thinking that's going to be one hell of a talk they're going to have. Looking forward to the next update.
Comments from author:
*grins* I'm glad to know I handled it well, especially since I was a bit worried about readers would feel about me skipping the trial.

As for Buffy and Narcissa - that scene got wrote and rewrote almost right up until I posted it. The first three/four times it tended to read as non-con, which wasn't at all what I was going for. Thankfully I finally managed to get that scene to read like I wanted.

I'm working on the next chapter, specifically the "talk," which is actually going slightly better than expected. I'm good at stirring things up, not so much with having the characters work through them. Of course, this might be helped because one of the characters (Spike) isn't having any issues here at all, and he seems perfectly willing to talk "sense" into the other two.
Review By [Ellia] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ellia
Review:
Having caught up on the whole thing, i can only say *wow*, ~ you've managed to bring each new crossover in without sacrificing any of the natural flow of the story, and your core characters remain very believable.

I like the fact that Xander, Buffy and Spike are having a chance to settle their unfinished business with their old friends, seems like it'll make it easier for them to move on; as and when they get back to Vander's world.

Also enjoying the way you aren't just handwaving all their problems with Dumbledore etc away, you actually making them think and work out their problems using the local laws which is great.

Really looking forward to the next bit
Comments from author:
It's always nice to get feedback like this. *grins*

But I will admit that you might find the next chapter a bit of a let-down, because while I'm not waving the problems with Dumbledore away, I've discovered that every time I try to write the trial itself I get bogged down, so I will be cheating a bit by having the trial itself happen off-screen, but the lead-up to the trial will happen on-screen as well as the reactions after the trial.

Thank you for reading and especially reviewing.
Review By [Ellia] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from kayron
Review:
I hope that the Scoobies can figure out how to trip up Dumbledore. Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
HeHe!

I suppose I should admit that if doing things the legal way fail to work, well, the Scoobies do have a rather extreme back-up plan. *evil grin* But they probably won't need it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [kayron] • Date [29 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from kayron
Review:
Liking the new version of Consequences. The Scoobies get to do a 'Bionic Man' on Harry Potter. The opening of the show went "We can rebuild him. Make better. Stronger. Faster." etc. They can give him a better life WITHOUT Dumbledore's influence. I'm looking forward to seeing how that works out.
Comments from author:
*smiles* I admit that in my own head I've always wondered how Harry might turn out if he'd been raised by someone (anyone) else. There are many fine fanfics out there that play on this idea, and I decided to throw my hat in the ring. Though I will probably restrain myself from making this Harry Potter completely different from the canon one - probably. ;)
(Of course, this new family for Harry is in their own way even more extreme than the Dursley's just in a better way.)

I'm working on the next chapter, but I can't say how long it will take because in the next chapter "things" really start to happen.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [kayron] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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