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Review of chapter "Hell Dimensions and Soul Interventions" from Cutiepie
Review:
This is very interesting. With Xander as Alpha, I am wondering if (due to his fractured memories and such) killing all the dolls as he did was the only way that he knew to release them from the (especially in his mind) hell that they were psudo-living through. And perhaps it was recognition that kept him from killing Echo and Claire? Otherwise, it really makes no sense that he would leave Echo/Faith untouched and not finish off Claire/Fred/Illyria (not to mention the whole rest of the "house") during his rampage. Of course, that is assuming that he had met Illyria sometime during the destruction of Sunnydale and whenever he was taken and made a doll.

I hope that my theory here makes sense. Don't feel like you have to say if I am right or not (especially if it would spoil any future plot developments!) And, yes, I do like using parentheses, as if you couldn't tell.
Comments from author:
Suffice it to say Xander is completely messed up in the head and in his psyche. With the alpha hyena and soldier boy plus with all the imprints that Dollhouse forced upon him he needs some help, and it will be a lot to get him through this once he gets that help. and the whole Dr. Saunders thing in my world is that she saved herself from him in my opinion as she still has some connection with the god-king inside her. and I believe his always had a connection with Echo/Faith sinse the day he met her.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell Dimensions and Soul Interventions" from Bobboky
Review:
interesting
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell Dimensions and Soul Interventions" from IcemanII
Review:
Wonderful story
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. :)
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Miles to Go" from angelus
Review:
ah how ironic that Willow's trigger word for getting her memories back is angel :) especially when he played with people's memories during the whole Connor thing
Comments from author:
Hmmm, never thought of it that way. Thanks for the review
Review By [angelus] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Miles to Go" from CPTSkip
Review:
First of all, very cool that Echo was imprinted as "Sydney" when she was sent after Angel. Lol! You've done an excellent job of merging the Buffyverse with the Dollhouseverse. But you sure do have a lot of plot balls in the air at the same time. I look forward to seeing how you eventually bring order out of all your chaos. If you do, that is. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review CPTSkip. I like to throw stuff like the Sydney (did I spell that wrong in my fic, sorry.) thing in there. With a story such as Dollhouse I think theirs plenty of room to throw stuff like that in their. With Tophers imagination who knows who he will imprint the dolls as. leaves everything open to the imagination don't you think. As much as I love Angel I always loved when he thourougly got his ass kicked, it was always hilarious.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [4 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Miles to Go" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flashbacks" from lostinthis
Review:
A lot of connections between the Buffy and Dollhouse characters, like to see how it all comes together. Though I wonder if it wouldn't have been smarter for the Dollhouse to have Connor taken in (instead of another hell dimension where time goes who knows how fast?). After all, in my eyes Connor Reilly is technically the first Doll that Whedon made ;) Keep it up!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I thought about having Conner as a doll, but I believe their is a fanfic out there that ran with that idea already. I'm glad you like more chaps up. :))
Review By [lostinthis] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Slayers Dollhouse" from DarkestSlayer
Review:
I know first thing I said to my friend when I was watching the pilot was: the set reminds me of Wolfram and Hart in season 5
Comments from author:
I knew I wasn't the only one that noticed that. :)
Review By [DarkestSlayer] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flashbacks" from angelus
Review:
wow this chapter was good poor Scoobies and Fang Gang looking forward to when Travers get's his ass kicked
Comments from author:
Thanks, oh yeah Travers is primed for a beat down when the fang gang and the Scoobies find out his behind all this.
Review By [angelus] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flashbacks" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things We Lost" from RevDorothyL
Review:
More and more fascinating, and I can't wait for the 'payback' to truly kick in on Travers and the other deserving folks!
Comments from author:
Thank you, and Travers will get his up and comings on both ends. When you mess with evil you always get burned. Glad you like it, next chap is on it's way soon.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things We Lost" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Wonderful story...however, I am a little confused..

Ballard is Buffy's fiancee?
Xander is Alpha?
Is Lila Morgan Adele?
Is Boyd Xander's father?
And did Dollhouse hurt Connor...which is why Angel wants to take them down...
And Clare is Fred?

Am i understanding this correctly...?

Please updated soon!
Comments from author:
You have all correct except one Boyd is Gunn and Alonna Father I put that in the third chap but did not put his name sorry will fix that. But wow I did not want to reveal that Adele was Lilah Morgan yet and you guessed it gippers. Yes Dollhouse did something to Conner that will be revealed in the next couple of chapters. And yes Clare is a mixture of Fred/Illyria since Dollhouse restored her soul. hopefully all your confusion will be wiped in the next couple of chaps lol. :) Thanks for the review.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Things We Lost" from angelus
Review:
Great premise behind the Dollhouse and I can picture that weasel Travers doing something like this
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm thrilled that you like. Yes Travers is just the weasel to do such a dastardly thing. more to come soon I promise.
Review By [angelus] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Slayers Dollhouse" from iroshi
Review:
I'm surprised that you say not a lot of people have guessed who Alpha is. I thought it was obvious from the beginning chapter. But then, I'm a Xander/Faith fan as well. However, as much as I like the premise and I think the character development is well done, I have to admit that the story itself is a bit jumbled and difficult to follow. A little more exposition might help in places. (But of course, the confusion might be on purpose, in which case okay - I'd never argue with a writer's concept of what they're trying to do; but if it's not intentional, then you might want to know that your readers might be a bit confused.)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I have left some things hidden on purpose if that's what you mean. Some things will be revealed in the next couple of chaps though that may make things a little clearer. Yeah I was surprised about the Alpha thing to. but I'm glad you figured it out. :)
Review By [iroshi] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
Alpha is the Zeppo I guess,
This will add to your story's success
Comments from author:
Yes he is, not a lot of people have guessed that correctly. I'm surprised I thought I made it way to easy.LOL
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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