Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from ladyfiana
Review:
I'm enjoying this story alot. Faith/Xander is one of my favorite pairings so I'm happy to see that. Hope you write more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. When I saw the episode about Alpha it just reminded me of something that would happen to poor Xander if he became a doll, and the whole alpha within the Alpha made my head explode. I always wanted to explore the what if Xander and Faith ended up together.
Review By [ladyfiana] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Not Rated
It's not bad... I think it has potential to be really good. FYI: It's Agent Paul Ballard. Not Bower. Agent Bower is on 24. Completely different men. I thought you would know this, since you do watch Dollhouse, right?
Comments from author:
Sorry about that will change it immediately, that was dumb of me, really getting to know all the other characters my fault. Thanks for the review.
Perfect! I can even totally understand your Alpha's motivations now. But I bet poor Xander will be racked by guilt when he realizes the innocents his alter ego killed on his way to get back at QT. His inner alpha hyena and Soldier Boy even explain why he was able to break free of his Dollhouse chains. I look forward to more. Hint, hint. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review CPTSkip. makes me feel great that you have taken a liking to my take on the story. Not only has the Alpha and the soldier taken over but all the alteregos that the Dollhouse implanted in him. Poor Xander always seems to absorb everything that possesses him.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Oh my gosh, you just killed my brain. Not only an update so soon but you've just added Xander. Am I right? I mean I guessed it at the second paragraph, "An Alpha inside the Alpha," that was just awesome. And Echo/Faith being his mate, *swoons* that's just so cool. The whole concept of this story is great. I hope that you get inspired to write more soon, I just love this. Also, if you still need a beta, someone to make some corrections and bounce ideas with, I am so there.
Comments from author:
Awesome, you guessed right Xanderfan and you are the one that put that plot bunny in my head to. Great and as for your offer I totally accept. thanks for the review the bunny is jumping.
Review By [xanderfan] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Slayers Dollhouse" from CPTSkip
Review:
Terrific setup! Yes, I can see that evil bastard QT setting up the Dollhouse. When I watched the show tonight, I thought Echo was expressing her inner Faith very blatantly. I hope you continue your story. I do wonder where the rest of the Scoobies are. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you when I first saw Dollhouse, it just screamed Of QT to me. Ooh my muse is jumping around in my head next chapter yeah.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Slayers Dollhouse" from xanderfan
Review:
Woah that is an excellent idea. Very, very original premise and that could really work. I hope you intend on continuing this, there are just so many ways that you could go with this. Wow, I'm amazed at how well this could work out. I'll definitely be tracking this.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you like the idea. As soon as my muse gives me more on this it shall be up and running. Thanks for the review.
Review By [xanderfan] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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