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Review of chapter "Conversations With A Dragon: Baraa" from Darksnider
Review:
I gotta say that was awesome I wanna see a version of Naruto with this his soul should survive as well with the seal to protect it, meh anyway looking forward to the next update.
Comments from author:
And if I knew enough about Naruto... Or, well, ANYTHING about Naruto, I'd do my best. As it is, however... Not so much. Sorry.

I've got a Hellsing xover planned in it, though. That should be fun.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conversations With A Dragon: Baraa" from Inquisitor
Review:
cool story...would had liked more details about it though...a saiyan body is probably the best vessel for Illyria, especially since Illyria's natural size was probably the same size as an Oozaru...Baara could had gone and done the multiform technique and made duplicates of himself...this would allow Goku to get his body back but also create a separate body for Baara to inhabit...most likely Goku&Baara would be linked in some way but this would give both of them a chance to compete with each other...as for how powerful Goku can be, i would had thought that Baara would had reached the SS4 stage by the Buu series, especially if Baara had kept Goku's tail and stayed in Oozaru form most of the time...
Comments from author:
*sigh* Sadly, only a pure Saiyan can become an SS4. When Vegeta was possessed by Baby, he couldn't perform the transformation. I have to assume Baraa has the same effect on Goku.

Baraa did indeed keep the tail, however, considering he didn't want to call attention to himself, he didn't spend much time in it. Full moons only. Make no mistake, he could have triggered the gland whenever he wanted, he was just keeping a low profile.

Anyway, thanks for reading!
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conversations With A Dragon: Baraa" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
I know rather less about Dragonball than I know about the intestinal parasites of the Amazonian capybara but this was quite entertaining and well written. I did notice an error, however; in this line, 'if they are not amiable to my wishes', 'amiable' should be 'amenable'.
Comments from author:
Actually, 'amiable' works as well. The second definition is 'generally agreeable.'

I actually have no idea what capybara is, but if it's anything like the virus they mentioned in The Rundown... *shudders* :D

Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations With A Dragon: Baraa" from Arekanderu
Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what Illyria does to the rest of the multiverse :)
Comments from author:
Hehe. Well, we've got five universes to go.
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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