This story rocks. I love the way you have Sunnydale in the D.C. universe and have Xander dress up as a Marvel ex-supervillian mutant girl from the Marvel universe.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Enjoying the story and hope you continue with a new chapter soon. As much as Cordelia can be a pain to everyone, I hope they figure out what happened to her soon and find her before it is too late. Also having two Willows will be a real help to the group, I don't think the lost twin thing would have been that out there (especially for Sunnydale) but Lorna is fine too. I do think having a body disappear is odd, but I guess they just had the Sunnydale effect and forgot/overlooked it. Still, thanks again for the story and update when you can.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
That was really good! I LOVE GirlXander fics! They're always so fun to read. Do you think that you could maybe include a little Angel in this fic? I mean, maybe Wanda could alter the curse so he won't have to worry about the happiness clause so he and Buffy could do whatever they wnted -cough Angel's Bedroom cough- Anyways, PLEASE update soon!!!!! I can't wait to find out what's gunna happne next!!!!!
I don't see how Dick came to the conclusion that no one was doing anything about it when the young woman he encountered obviously knew how to deal with vampires. The fact that it would not appear to be organized and massive in its scope might bother him but that is just poor deduction on his part. Also, I cannot believe that his computer skills would be so lacking that a simple search for the name Wanda Maximoff wouldn't turn up the fact that there was a comic book character of that name. Then when he saw what happened to Cordelia he didn't at least consider the possibility that a similar transformation hadn't occurred to Wanda? Dick is slipping or the Hellmouth is radically messing up his thinking.
Comments from author:
first of all i agree that dick should have noticed the young woman knew about the night life. But he did say that if they did know about the night life they weren't doing anything about it, the only reason she helped him was because he had saved her. Second i had already said before that there are no marvel comics in this universe, i'll make a authors note of it next chapter. The third point is true but if you noticed he had thought Wanda was a girl before so he thought the changes were the powers. Apparently Xander makes a good woman. So in my opinion Dick isn't slipping at all. I will try to be more careful when writing Dick in the future.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seeing Double" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Hi... was Lorna/Willow the one who went into the coma, or the one who had an extra week of memories? Also why wouldn't Dick send Bruce and email, they had them in the 90s, you know. Infestation of vampires sounds like an important detail. Maybe they even have a JSA sattilight uplink? Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
the answer to your first question will be answered next chapter when a part of the story is in the changed Willows view point. Also i didn't think of having him send an e-mail since i thought it was to important information that Bruce would have to hear it from him. I didn't even think of using the Justice League since Dick would most likely not use it since he's not part of it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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