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Review of chapter "The NID (National Institute of Dimwits)" from rubysilkensun
Review:
I was positively giddy when I saw you had posted. I still love this story and hope to see more.

Nicely done cutting the ground out from under the NID.
Comments from author:
I try. Glad people stuck around and put up with me... ;)
Review By [rubysilkensun] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The NID (National Institute of Dimwits)" from CageFire
Review:
Awesome to see a new chapter after so long. I hope the next one won't be quite as long of a wait. :)
Comments from author:
So do I. I'll do my best to manage that, but no promises.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The NID (National Institute of Dimwits)" from RevDorothyL
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Welcome back!

It was pure pleasure to watch Xander and Janus twist the NID's tail in the person of one Harry Maybourne. And I love this chapter's explanation of what "NID" stands for. :)
Comments from author:
Everyone hates the NID... Had to deal with them, honestly. Didn't want to keep them around, though.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The NID (National Institute of Dimwits)" from Genuka
Review:
*stares* Your evil. More?
Comments from author:
Evil? Moi? Mwahaha...
Review By [Genuka] • Date [5 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The NID (National Institute of Dimwits)" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Very pleased to this back! Xander's offering quite the incentive package to trusting him here looking to see what that gets him.
Comments from author:
Yep. SGC gets the carrot... NID gets hit with the stick...
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The NID (National Institute of Dimwits)" from removedauthor
Review:
That was a fantastic story so far I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. It would be interesting if you made Willow the host for the queen.
Comments from author:
*smiles* An intriguing idea, but probably not going to happen. Willow would see that as Xander leading her on, and Xander is desperately trying to avoid that.
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The NID (National Institute of Dimwits)" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Hi, Jasper. I seem to recall reading a part of this story back in the day, but not the entire plot prior to this chapter. Thanks for getting back in the game and continuing this one.
Comments from author:
No problem... You might say the fourth was with me... ;)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Janus of Kheb" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Yeah, always disappointed that they didn't follow-up with the Nox. Glad you fit that in.
Comments from author:
So was I... And there were some species that were shafted even worse. The Reetou and that Aquatic Alien in Fire and Water had a lot of potential...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Direct Approach" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Yep.That's about as direct as possible without sounding like an idiot or a direct threat.
Comments from author:
Yeah... Pretty much
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goodbye" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like the gift of confidence that Xander left Willow with.
Comments from author:
I admit I was rather pleased with that one.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Initial Reactions" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good handling of something difficult - 3 people in one body. With only one of them having native rights... but being very accomodating.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm pleased its working well.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelation" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Yep. Xander must have been driven partially insane by hosting Shenzi, if he'll be giving Shenzi 1/3 facetime. I suppose it's like having 2 older brothers though. In your own body. Never alone. Stronger and more able to protect - but no always having to be in control. I can see Xander's motivation.
Comments from author:
Yeah... It's a touch crowded in there
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The NID (National Institute of Dimwits)" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The NID (National Institute of Dimwits)" from grd
Review:
Best definition for NID so far.
Comments from author:
Sad but true
Review By [grd] • Date [4 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All About Janus" from Draek
Review:
Dangerous weapon + maybourne = death of said nid agent.
Comments from author:
Snorts... Maybourne's a cockroach. He'll survive anything...
Review By [Draek] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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